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Sumomo

Oct. 19, 2021

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I will have to make my driving license renewal tomorrow. The renewal deadline was last January, but it was postponed three times because of coronavirus situation. There was one more opportunity to delay the deadline, but I decided not to delay it anymore. I should put on my make up more carefully than usual, because I will make taken a photo for license. I wonder why photos for license are always terrible. My face in the photo usually look pale and evil!

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License

I will have to make my driving license renewal tomorrow.

Your sentence is correct. However, consider also:
I'll have to renew my driving license* tomorrow.

* "License" is both a noun and a verb in the United States. If you live in any other English-speaking country, you would will spell it "licence" when you use it as a noun and "license" when you use it as a verb.

The renewal deadline was last January, but it was postponed three times because of the coronavirus situation.

There was one more opportunity to delay the deadline, but I decided not to delay it anymore.

I should put on my make up more carefully than usual, because I will make taken a photo for license.

Re "make up", opinions differ a little about when to use the various forms, but here is a reasonable guide:
noun: makeup" or even "make-up";
adjective: "make-up";
verb: "make up".

I wonder why photos for licenses are always terrible.

My face in the photo usually looks pale and evil!

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Perfectly understandable without any corrections, but I hope my suggestions help you with your English learning.
Sincerely,
mjm

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Sumomo

Oct. 20, 2021

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Thank you always for your corrections and detailed explanations!

License


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will have to make my driving license renewal tomorrow.


I will have to make my driving license renewal tomorrow.

Your sentence is correct. However, consider also: I'll have to renew my driving license* tomorrow. * "License" is both a noun and a verb in the United States. If you live in any other English-speaking country, you would will spell it "licence" when you use it as a noun and "license" when you use it as a verb.

The renewal deadline was last January, but it was postponed three times because of coronavirus situation.


The renewal deadline was last January, but it was postponed three times because of the coronavirus situation.

There was one more opportunity to delay the deadline, but I decided not to delay it anymore.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I should put on my make up more carefully than usual, because I will make taken a photo for license.


I should put on my make up more carefully than usual, because I will make taken a photo for license.

Re "make up", opinions differ a little about when to use the various forms, but here is a reasonable guide: noun: makeup" or even "make-up"; adjective: "make-up"; verb: "make up".

I wonder why photos for license are always terrible.


I wonder why photos for licenses are always terrible.

My face in the photo usually look pale and evil!


My face in the photo usually looks pale and evil!

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