Dec. 17, 2021
Hey, my real name is Anita, but my secret name is Libretas. I am superheroine and my simbol is a black thunder.
My costume is all black like a dark with white thunder on my chest and I also have a black mask that only covers half of my face. Because I don't want people to see and recognize me. My powers are simple I am able to think, act, move in seconds or less far faster than normal people could think of. I also have weapons because my powers aren't strong enough.I have weapons all over my body like a simple handgun, battle staff and bracelets that discharge electricity.People didn't see me because I only transform when the last sunlight sets and the first rays of the moon come out.
I have many enemies, but my worst enemie is Quicksilver. He takes electricity from neighboring cities to keep the whole world in darkness, but I stop him from doing it every time and sometimes I win and bring electricity back to the city, but I think he will never stop until total darkness comes into the world.
Libretas
Hey, my real name is Anita, but my secret name is Libretas.
I am superheroine and my siymbol is a black thunderbolt.
By "thunder" did you mean lightning bolt? (They can also be called "thunderbolts") I'm not quite sure. For reference, this is what I think you meant: https://tse1.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.8NOSdbw12tvGJWxpfyFp1wHaHp&pid=Api&P=0&w=300&h=300
My costume is all black like a dark, with a white thunderlightning bolt on my chest, and I also have a black mask that only covers half of my face.,
I'm not sure what you meant by "with a dark" here.
Bbecause I don't want people to see and recognize me.
Better to link this part with the previous sentence.
My powers are simple I am able to think, act, move in mere seconds or less, far faster than normal people could think of.
Just added a word for the flow.
I also have weapons because my powers aren't strong enough. (on their own). I have weapons all over my body like a simple handgun, battle staff and bracelets that discharge electricity. People didon't see me because I only transform when the last sunlight sets and the first rays of the moon come outfall.
1. Added a phrase for flow (the one in brackets)
2. One usually says "rays of X *fall*" (depends on the dialect though)
I have many enemies, but my worst enemiey is Quicksilver.
He takes electricity from neighboring cities to keep the whole world in darkness, but I stop him from doing it every time and sometimes I win and bring electricity back to the city, but I think he will never stop until total darkness comes intovers the world.
Changed a word because it sounded more natural.
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Quite well-written, good spelling, and generally well-structured sentences with some mistakes. Keep on writing, I really like when you do! :)
Libretas
Hey, my real name is Anita, but my secret name is Libretas.
I am a superheroine and my siymbol is a black thunderbolt.
My costume is all black like a dark with a white thunderbolt on my chest, and I also have a black mask that only covers half of my face.
BThis is because I don't want people to see and recognize me.
My powers are simple: I am able to think, act, and move in seconds or less; far faster than normal people could think of.
I also have weapons because my powers aren't strong enough. I have weapons all over my body, like a simple handgun, battle staff and bracelets that discharge electricity. People didon't see me because I only transform when the last sunlightsun sets and the first rays of the moon come out.
I have many enemies, but my worst enemiey is Quicksilver.
He takes electricity from neighboring cities to keep the whole world in darkness, but I stop him from doing it every time, and sometimes I win and bring electricity back to the city, but I think he will never stop until total darkness comes intotakes over the world.
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Hey, my real name is Anita, but my secret name is Libretas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I am superheroine and my simbol is a black thunder. I am a superheroine I am superheroine and my s By "thunder" did you mean lightning bolt? (They can also be called "thunderbolts") I'm not quite sure. For reference, this is what I think you meant: https://tse1.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.8NOSdbw12tvGJWxpfyFp1wHaHp&pid=Api&P=0&w=300&h=300 |
My costume is all black like a dark with white thunder on my chest and I also have a black mask that only covers half of my face. My costume is all black My costume is all black I'm not sure what you meant by "with a dark" here. |
Because I don't want people to see and recognize me.
Better to link this part with the previous sentence. |
My powers are simple I am able to think, act, move in seconds or less far faster than normal people could think of. My powers are simple: I am able to think, act, and move in seconds or less; far faster than normal people could think My powers are simple I am able to think, act, move in mere seconds or less, far faster than normal people could think of. Just added a word for the flow. |
I also have weapons because my powers aren't strong enough.I have weapons all over my body like a simple handgun, battle staff and bracelets that discharge electricity.People didn't see me because I only transform when the last sunlight sets and the first rays of the moon come out. I also have weapons because my powers aren't strong enough. I have weapons all over my body, like I also have weapons because my powers aren't strong enough 1. Added a phrase for flow (the one in brackets) 2. One usually says "rays of X *fall*" (depends on the dialect though) |
I have many enemies, but my worst enemie is Quicksilver. I have many enemies, but my worst enem I have many enemies, but my worst enem |
He takes electricity from neighboring cities to keep the whole world in darkness, but I stop him from doing it every time and sometimes I win and bring electricity back to the city, but I think he will never stop until total darkness comes into the world. He takes electricity from neighboring cities to keep the whole world in darkness, but I stop him from doing it every time, and sometimes I win and bring electricity back to the city, but I think he will never stop until total darkness He takes electricity from neighboring cities to keep the whole world in darkness, but I stop him from doing it every time and sometimes I win and bring electricity back to the city, but I think he will never stop until total darkness co Changed a word because it sounded more natural. |
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