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June 29, 2024

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In those days when I used to go to the library, I heard that all the books stored in most libraries across the world would be digitalized in the years to come. In fact, the library staff were planning to do so, but they said there was a big financial problem with digitalization of all the materials. If they succeed in it, users can access to library materials outside of the library and the library itself will simply become a studying place without any shelves. I don’t think that’s desirable.
 
Despite the popularity of digital books nowadays, I still like to hold a book in my hands. I prefer physical books, because I like touching, turning and smelling the pages of a book. At the same time, I love libraires where we can come across various books. Besides, libraries are the best place as a cooling shelter while spending time reading in crazy hot summer. May long live libraries!


私が図書館に通っていた頃、世界中のほとんどの図書館にある本は、今後数年ですべてデジタル化されるだろうと聞いていました。実際、図書館の職員方はそうするつもりでしたが、すべての資料のデジタル化には大きな財政的問題があると言われました。もしそれが成功すれば、利用者は図書館の外でも図書館資料にアクセスでき、図書館自体は棚のない単なる勉強場所になります。それは望ましいことではないと思います。

最近はデジタルブックが人気ですが、私はまだ本を手に持つのが好きです。私は物理的な本の方が好きです。なぜなら、本のページに触れたり、めくったり、匂いを嗅いだりするのが好きだからです。同時に、さまざまな本に出会える図書館が大好きです。それに、図書館は猛烈に暑い夏に読書をしながら涼しいシェルターとして最高の場所です。図書館万歳!

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In those days when I used to go to the library, I heard that all the books stored in most libraries across the world would be digitalized in the years to come.

In fact, the library staff were planning to do so, but they said there was a big financial problem with digitalization of all the materials.

At the same time, I love librairies where we can come across various books.

Besides, libraries are the best place as a cooling shelter while spending time reading in crazy hot summer.

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ronpei

July 4, 2024

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Thank you for the corrections.

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In tThose days when I used to go to the library, I heard that all the books stored in most libraries across the world, would be digitalized in the years to come.

In fact, the library staff were planning to do so, but they said there was a big financial problem with digitalization ofcostly to digitalise all the materials.

If they succeed into do it, users canould have access to library materials outside of the library and the library itself will simply become a studying placeplace to study without any shelves of books.

I don’t think that’s desirable.

Despite the popularity of digital books nowadays, I still like to hold a book in my hands.

I prefer physical books, because I like touching, turning and smelling the pages of a book.

At the same time, I love libraires where we can come across variousfind different types of books.

Besides, libraries are the best place as ato cooling shelter while off and spending time reading induring a crazy hot summer.

May long live libraries!

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ronpei

July 4, 2024

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Thank you for the corrections.

If they succeed in itwith this, users can have access to library materials outside of the library, and the library itself will simply become a studying place without any shelves.

At the same time, I love librairies where we can come across various books.

Besides, libraries are the best place as a cooling shelter while spending time reading into read while staying cool in a crazy hot summer.

The sentence sounded a little bit unclear, so I just made it more direct.

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お疲れ様でした!Good job!

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ronpei

June 30, 2024

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Besides, libraries are the best place to read while staying cool in a crazy hot summer.
これは鮮やかです!!まさにこう言いたかったのです。ありがとうございました。

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In those days when I used to go to the library, I heard that allmost of the books stored in most libraries across the world would be digitalized in the years to come.

I think "In those days when" sounds a bit better as "Back when" or "Back in those days when".

In fact, the library staff were planning to do so, but they said there was a big financial problem with digitalization of all the materials.

If they succeeded in it, users canould access tohe library materials outside of the library and the library itself willould simply become a studying place without any shelves.

The tenses I've used are more consistent with the *past* discussion and planning of the library staff.

I don’t think that’s desirable.

Despite the popularity of digital books nowadays, I still like to hold a book in my hands.

I prefer physical books, because I like touching, turning, and smelling the pages of a book.

At the same time, I love librairies where we can come across various books.

Besides, libraries are the best place asfor staying in a cooling shelter while spending time reading in the crazy hot summer.

May lLong live libraries!

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ronpei

June 30, 2024

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素早い添削、ありがとうございました。

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In those days when I used to go to the library, I heard that all the books stored in most libraries across the world would be digitalized in the years to come.


In those days when I used to go to the library, I heard that allmost of the books stored in most libraries across the world would be digitalized in the years to come.

I think "In those days when" sounds a bit better as "Back when" or "Back in those days when".

In tThose days when I used to go to the library, I heard that all the books stored in most libraries across the world, would be digitalized in the years to come.

In those days when I used to go to the library, I heard that all the books stored in most libraries across the world would be digitalized in the years to come.

In fact, the library staff were planning to do so, but they said there was a big financial problem with digitalization of all the materials.


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In fact, the library staff were planning to do so, but they said there was a big financial problem with digitalization ofcostly to digitalise all the materials.

In fact, the library staff were planning to do so, but they said there was a big financial problem with digitalization of all the materials.

If they succeed in it, users can access to library materials outside of the library and the library itself will simply become a studying place without any shelves.


If they succeeded in it, users canould access tohe library materials outside of the library and the library itself willould simply become a studying place without any shelves.

The tenses I've used are more consistent with the *past* discussion and planning of the library staff.

If they succeed in itwith this, users can have access to library materials outside of the library, and the library itself will simply become a studying place without any shelves.

If they succeed into do it, users canould have access to library materials outside of the library and the library itself will simply become a studying placeplace to study without any shelves of books.

I don’t think that’s desirable.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Despite the popularity of digital books nowadays, I still like to hold a book in my hands.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I prefer physical books, because I like touching, turning and smelling the pages of a book.


I prefer physical books, because I like touching, turning, and smelling the pages of a book.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the same time, I love libraires where we can come across various books.


At the same time, I love librairies where we can come across various books.

At the same time, I love librairies where we can come across various books.

At the same time, I love libraires where we can come across variousfind different types of books.

At the same time, I love librairies where we can come across various books.

Besides, libraries are the best place as a cooling shelter while spending time reading in crazy hot summer.


Besides, libraries are the best place asfor staying in a cooling shelter while spending time reading in the crazy hot summer.

Besides, libraries are the best place as a cooling shelter while spending time reading into read while staying cool in a crazy hot summer.

The sentence sounded a little bit unclear, so I just made it more direct.

Besides, libraries are the best place as ato cooling shelter while off and spending time reading induring a crazy hot summer.

Besides, libraries are the best place as a cooling shelter while spending time reading in crazy hot summer.

May long live libraries!


May lLong live libraries!

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