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Agriculture Products Trade Fair

In autumn, our province will hold an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I will attend the fair for work reasons. Agriculture is a basic industry, people cannot live without it, but agriculture is hard to do; farmers are hard to be, and it is difficult to make money as a farmer. I don't know if it is the same situation in other countries. Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who do it can easily be rich, but the opposite is true. I don't know why this is the case. Maybe there are many things in the world like that. They are just mysteries and you never figure them out.

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Agriculture is a basic industry, people cannot live without it, but agriculture is hard to do; farmers are hard to be, and it is difficult to make money as a farmer.

I don't know if it is the same situation in other countries.

I don't know why this is the case.

Maybe there are many things in the world like that.

They are just mysteries and you never figure them out.

Agriculture Products Trade Fair


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In autumn, our province will hold an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I will attend the fair for work reasons.


InEvery autumn, our province will holds an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I willand I attend the fair for work reasons. Every autumn, our province holds an Agricultural Products Trade fair and I attend the fair for work reasons.

Since this happens every year I changed it to present tense.

IEvery year in autumn, our province will holds an Agricultural Products Trade fair every year and I will attend ithe fair for work reasons. Every year in autumn our province holds an Agricultural Products Trade fair and I will attend it for work reasons.

Agriculture is a basic industry, people cannot live without it, but agriculture is hard to do; farmers are hard to be, and it is difficult to make money as a farmer.


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Agriculture is a basic industry, people cannot live without it, but agricultureit is hard to do; farmerit is hare hard to bed being a farmer, and it is difficult to make money as a farmerin this profession. Agriculture is a basic industry, people cannot live without it, but it is hard to do; it is hard being a farmer, and it is difficult to make money in this profession.

I don't know if it is the same situation in other countries.


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Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who do it can easily be rich, but the opposite is true.


Literally, the basicmost fundamental industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who do it can easily be rich, but the opposite is true. Literally, the most fundamental industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who do it can easily be rich, but the opposite is true.

I think you wanted to express how important and necessary the industry is, so I used the word "fundamental." I see what you were trying to say with "basic" but in this case it comes off as a "simple" industry

Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who dowork on it can easily become rich, but the opposite is true. Literally, the basic industry should be an industry that can easily make money and people who work on it can easily become rich, but the opposite is true.

I don't know why this is the case.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe there are many things in the world like that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They are just mysteries and you never figure them out.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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