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Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicating with you, and I hope everything is going well for you.

Before that, our discipline inspection department informed me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.

Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the headmaster of my previous work unit. I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

In 2018, our work unit only had two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to the positions.

We held a general meeting of all staff to select the five people leading group for professional title evaluation, and rules were made by this five people group, then two people won according to the rules.

It was extremely fair and I was impartial enough during the whole process. But someone always blames me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.

This is the third time they reported me for no reason even though they do it anonymously.

In China, the State Discipline Inspection Department is very powerful. If we did wrong things, we would be punished strictly.

Many Chinese officials at every level are fired and are put in jails every year. All the national public officials are afraid to receive calls from the Discipline Inspection Commission.

I become very upset when I receive calls from it although I haven't done bad things.

I used a week to explain all the accusations in formal papers, but I still don't know if it's already done.

Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do bad things.

By the way, my mom just died three days ago. Thank you for your concerns about her when she was alive.

Currently, I am still in a bad mood. I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted to have a break to cure my mood. If I feel well, I will let you know. Thank you very much.

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Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicating with you, and I hope everything is going well for you.

Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the headmaster of my previous work unit.

It was extremely fair and I was impartial enough during the whole process.

But someone always blames me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.

In China, the State Discipline Inspection Department is very powerful.

All the national public officials are afraid to receive calls from the Discipline Inspection Commission.

I become very upset when I receive calls from it although I haven't done bad things.

Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do bad things.

By the way, my mom just died three days ago.

Thank you for your concerns about her when she was alive.

Currently, I am still in a bad mood.

If I feel well, I will let you know.

Thank you very much.

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Jan. 30, 2022

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Before that, our discipline inspection department informcontacted me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.

I don’t know what a “discipline inspection department” is. Also, you can inform me ABOUT something, but you can’t inform me TO do something.

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I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

Do you mean professional titles and technical abilities? A technical title would be their actual title (for example, “she’s technically the boss, but everyone treats her like an ordinary coworker.”)

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Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicating with you, and I hope everything is going well for you.


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Before that, our discipline inspection department informed me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.


Before that, our discipline inspection department informasked me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me. Before that, our discipline inspection department asked me to explain some things because someone reported me.

Before that, our discipline inspection department informcontacted me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me. Before that, our discipline inspection department contacted me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.

I don’t know what a “discipline inspection department” is. Also, you can inform me ABOUT something, but you can’t inform me TO do something.

Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the headmaster of my previous work unit.


Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the hleadmaster of my previous work unit. Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the leader of my previous work unit.

"Headmaster" we don't really use unless we are talking about schools.

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I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.


I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff gaiearn their salaries based on their professional and technical titles. I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff earn their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles. I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

Do you mean professional titles and technical abilities? A technical title would be their actual title (for example, “she’s technically the boss, but everyone treats her like an ordinary coworker.”)

In 2018, our work unit only had two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to the positions.


In 2018, our work unit only had two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to the positions. In 2018, our work unit only had two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to the position.

We held a general meeting of all staff to select the five people leading group for professional title evaluation, and rules were made by this five people group, then two people won according to the rules.


We held a general meeting of all the staff members to select the five people to leading the group for professional title evaluations, and the rules were made by thisese five people group, t. Then, two people won according to the rules. We held a general meeting of all the staff members to select five people to lead the group for professional title evaluations, and the rules were made by these five people. Then, two people won according to the rules.

We held a general meeting of all staff to select the five people leading group for professional title evaluamost qualified for the position, and rules were made by this five people group, then two people won according to the rules. We held a general meeting of all staff to select the five people most qualified for the position, and rules were made by this five people group, then two people won according to the rules.

It was extremely fair and I was impartial enough during the whole process.


It was extremely fair and I was impartial enough during the whole process. It was extremely fair and I was impartial during the whole process.

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But someone always blames me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.


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This is the third time they reported me for no reason even though they do it anonymously.


This is the third time they have reported me for no reason even though they’ve done it anonymously. This is the third time they have reported me for no reason even though they’ve done it anonymously.

In China, the State Discipline Inspection Department is very powerful.


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If we did wrong things, we would be punished strictly.


If we did wrong things, we would beo something wrong, we get punished strictly. If we do something wrong, we get punished strictly.

If we dido the wrong things, we would bare punished stricteverely. If we do the wrong thing, we are punished severely.

I think this tense is more commonly used when describing how things are.

Many Chinese officials at every level are fired and are put in jails every year.


Many Chinese officials at every level are fired and are put in jails every year. Many Chinese officials at every level are fired and are put in jail every year.

Many Chinese officials at every level are fired and are put in jails every year. Many Chinese officials at every level are fired and are put in jail every year.

All the national public officials are afraid to receive calls from the Discipline Inspection Commission.


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I become very upset when I receive calls from it although I haven't done bad things.


I become very upset when I receive calls from it althem even though I haven't done bad anythings bad. I become very upset when I receive calls from them even though I haven't done anything bad.

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I used a week to explain all the accusations in formal papers, but I still don't know if it's already done.


I usedt took me a week to explain all the accusations in formal papersdocumentation, but I still don't know if it's already done yet. It took me a week to explain all the accusations in formal documentation, but I still don't know if it's done yet.

I usedspent a week to explaining all the accusations in formal papers, but I still don't know if it's already done.enough. I spent a week explaining all the accusations in formal papers, but I still dont know if its enough.

(Not sure what you meant by “if it’s already done”, so my correction is a guess at your meaning.

Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do bad things.


Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do bad anythings bad. Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do anything bad.

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By the way, my mom just died three days ago.


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Thank you for your concerns about her when she was alive.


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Currently, I am still in a bad mood.


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I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted to have a break to cure my mood.


I almost stopped all my learnstudying because I wanted to have a break to curefix my mood. I almost stopped all my studying because I wanted to have a break to fix my mood.

I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted to have a break to curefix my mood. I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted to have a break to fix my mood.

You could use cure, but fix is probably a more typical way to say it.

If I feel well, I will let you know.


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Thank you very much.


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