May 18, 2025
Isaac found Hammond sitting against the wall, gasping for breath after he’d breathed in some toxic air on the Hydroponics deck. Hammond said he’d seen something huge in the food storage, and that crewmembers had been turned into bloated, “poison factories”.
There were eight grotesque, swollen abominations exuding toxic gas to get rid of. Isaac’s objective is to clear them out to make air breathable again, and kill the Leviathan too.
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The poison he'd prepared wasn't strong enough to kill the Leviathan.
Hammond said he’d seen something huge in the food storage, and that crew members had been turned into bloated, “poison factories”.
The people turned into a factory? Or the place was a factory. Normally a factory is a place rather than a person unless you mean metaphorically?
There were eight grotesque, swollen abominations exuding toxic gas to get rid of.
Or you could also say emitting
Isaac’s objective is to clear them out to make the air breathable again, and kill the Leviathan too.
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Overall well written
Isaac found Hammond sitting against the wall, gasping for breathair after he’'d breathed in some toxic air on the Hydroponics deck.
Hammond said he’d seen something huge in the food storage, and that crew members had been turned into bloated, “poison factories”.
There were eight grotesque, swollen abominations exuding toxic gas that was needed to get rid of them.
Isaac’s objective is to clear them out to make the air breathable again, and kill the Leviathan too.
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Good job!
There were eight grotesque, swollen abominations exuding toxic gas to get rid of. There were eight grotesque, swollen abominations exuding toxic gas that was needed to get rid of them. There were eight grotesque, swollen abominations exuding toxic gas Or you could also say emitting |
Isaac’s objective is to clear them out to make air breathable again, and kill the Leviathan too. Isaac’s objective is to clear them out to make the air breathable again, and kill the Leviathan too. Isaac’s objective is to clear them out to make the air breathable again, and kill the Leviathan too. |
[...] The poison he'd prepared wasn't strong enough to kill the Leviathan. |
Leviathan |
Isaac found Hammond sitting against the wall, gasping for breath after he’d breathed in some toxic air on the Hydroponics deck. Isaac found Hammond sitting against the wall, gasping for |
Hammond said he’d seen something huge in the food storage, and that crewmembers had been turned into bloated, “poison factories”. Hammond said he’d seen something huge in the food storage, and that crew members had been turned into bloated, “poison factories”. Hammond said he’d seen something huge in the food storage, and that crew members had been turned into bloated, “poison factories”. The people turned into a factory? Or the place was a factory. Normally a factory is a place rather than a person unless you mean metaphorically? |
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