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SilviaYChavez

May 20, 2025

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Letter to the hospital newsletter editor

Dear editor,
It is true that the nursing shortage is getting a big problem all around the world and more nurses are working over shifts due to the low staff the hospitals are facing nowadays. Moreover, working extra hours are leading nurses into burn out. That means that the shortage will continue due to the break downs the nurses would develop, leading them to stop working because of their mental health is having issues. That is why, I totally agree that the human resource area should put more attention on the timings the nurses are being asked to work in hospitals.
First, it is well known that overworked could lead to burn out. On November 2024, The Institute of Global Mental Health published an article about how working more than 8 hours each day, could increase with 50% the chances on developing a mental illness, such as burn out, anxiety and bipolar disorder. On this context, I believe that the schedule for nurses should be reduced to 8 hours shifts, and nurses must not be allowed to work more than 12 hours per day.
On the other hand, the cost of living and the low payments could lead nurses to work more time, regardless the Institute of Mental Health recommendations. In those cases, the main purpose for those nurses is to bring enough money to their families. As an example, In Mexico, The Science Institute, interviewed five hundred nurses in a public hospital about how many hours they worked per week the last month and the reason for that. The results were that above 60% of the nurses made from 10 to 15 extra hours per week last month. The main reasons were the following: 50% of the nurses felt the necessity to overwork in order to cover their daily expenses, 30% were been ask for the hospital to stay longer, and 20% did not have a specific reason. In conclusion, some nurses are not force to work more but they need to, or they want to. That is why I agree that better working conditions should be added at the health care system over the world in order to prioritize the mental health on nurses regardless external considerations. Thank you for reading my letter.
Warm Regards,
Silvia Ch.

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Dear editor,
It is true that t

T
he nursing shortage is gettindeed becoming a big problem all around the world, ands more nurses are working over shiftstime due to the low staff theing of hospitals are facing nowadays.

Moreover, working extra hours areis leading nurses into burn out.

That means that theis shortage will continue to increase due to the break downs among the nurses would develop, leading them to stop working because of theirdue to mental health is having issues.

That is why, I totally agree that the human resource areadepartments should putay more attention ton the timingschedules the nurses are being asked to work in hospitals.

Firstly, it is well known that overworkeding could lead to burn out.

OIn November 2024, Tthe Institute of Global Mental Health published an article about how working more than 8 hours eacha day, could increase withby 50% the chances onf developing a mental illness, such as burn out, anxiety, and bipolar disorder.

OIn this context, I believe that the schedule for nurses should be reduced to 8 -hours shifts, and nurses must not be allowed to work more than 12 hours per day.

On the other hand, the cost of living and the low payments could lead nurses to work more time, regardless of the Institute of Mental Health's recommendations.

In thosesuch cases, the main purpose ofor those nurses is to bring enough money to support their families.

As anFor example, Iin Mexico, Tthe Science Institute, interviewed five hundred nurses in a public hospital about how manyon the number of hours they worked per week in the last month and the reasons for that.

The results were that aboveshowed that more than 60% of the nurses made fromworked 10 to 15 extra hours per week last month.

The mainprimary reasons were the following: 50% of the nurses felt the necessity to overwork overtime in order to cover their daily expenses, 30% were been ask for the hospital to stay longerasked by the hospital, and 20% did not have any specific reason.

In conclusion, somenot all nurses are not forced to work more, but theysome need to, or theyand some want to.

That is why I agree that better working conditions should be added atinculcated within the health care system overaround the world in order to prioritize the mental health onf nurses regardless of external considerationircumstances.

Thank you for reading my letter.

Warm Regards,
Silvia Ch.

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SilviaYChavez

May 21, 2025

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Thank you!

Dear editor,
It is true

There is no doubt
that the nursing shortage is gettbecoming a big problem all around the world, and more nurses are working over shiftstime due to the low understaff theing hospitals are facing nowadayscurrently facing.

Moreover, working extra hours areis leading nurses into burn out.

Thatis means that the shortage will continue due to th, as nurses may experience break downs the nurses would develop, leadingat cause them to stop working because of theirdue to mental health is having issues.

That is why, I totalcompletely agree that thehospital human resource areas departments should putay more attention ton the timings thehours nurses are being asked to work in hospitals.

First, it is well known that being overworked couldan lead to burn out.

OIn November 2024, Tthe Institute of Global Mental Health published an article about howstating that working more than 8eight hours eacha day, could increase with 50% the chancesthe risk onf developing a mental illness, es—such as burn out, anxiety, and bipolar disorder—by 50%.

OIn this context, I believe that the schedule for nursenurses' shifts should be reduclimited to 8eight hours shifts, and nurses must, and they should not be allowed to work more than 12twelve hours per day.

On the other hand, the high cost of living and the low payments couldlow wages may lead nurses to work more timelonger hours, regardless of the Institute of Mental Health's recommendations.

In thosesuch cases, the main purpose for thosemotivation for nurses is to bringearn enough money to support their families.

As anFor example, Iin Mexico, Tthe Science Institute, interviewed five hundred500 nurses inat a public hospital about how many hours they worked per week over the lpast month and the reason for thats why.

The results wereshowed that abover 60% of the nurses made fromworked 10 to 15 extra hours per week last month.

The main reasons were theas followings: 50% of the nurses felt the necessity to overwork in orderextra hours to cover their daily expenses, 30% were been ask forasked by the hospital to stay longer, and 20% dihad not have a specific reason.

In conclusion, some nurses are not forced to work more hours, but they either need to, or they wantchoose to.

That is why I agree thatbelieve better working conditions should be added at theimplemented in health care system overs around the world in order to prioritize thenurses' mental health on nurses, regardless of external considerationfactors.

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You did a great job - there's just a lot of little cleanups and word changes that you can continue to work on.

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SilviaYChavez

May 21, 2025

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Thank you, I appreciate it!

Letter to the hospital newsletter editor


Dear editor, It is true that the nursing shortage is getting a big problem all around the world and more nurses are working over shifts due to the low staff the hospitals are facing nowadays.


Dear editor,
It is true

There is no doubt
that the nursing shortage is gettbecoming a big problem all around the world, and more nurses are working over shiftstime due to the low understaff theing hospitals are facing nowadayscurrently facing.

Dear editor,
It is true that t

T
he nursing shortage is gettindeed becoming a big problem all around the world, ands more nurses are working over shiftstime due to the low staff theing of hospitals are facing nowadays.

Thank you for reading my letter.


Thank you for reading my letter.

Moreover, working extra hours are leading nurses into burn out.


Moreover, working extra hours areis leading nurses into burn out.

Moreover, working extra hours areis leading nurses into burn out.

That means that the shortage will continue due to the break downs the nurses would develop, leading them to stop working because of their mental health is having issues.


Thatis means that the shortage will continue due to th, as nurses may experience break downs the nurses would develop, leadingat cause them to stop working because of theirdue to mental health is having issues.

That means that theis shortage will continue to increase due to the break downs among the nurses would develop, leading them to stop working because of theirdue to mental health is having issues.

That is why, I totally agree that the human resource area should put more attention on the timings the nurses are being asked to work in hospitals.


That is why, I totalcompletely agree that thehospital human resource areas departments should putay more attention ton the timings thehours nurses are being asked to work in hospitals.

That is why, I totally agree that the human resource areadepartments should putay more attention ton the timingschedules the nurses are being asked to work in hospitals.

First, it is well known that overworked could lead to burn out.


First, it is well known that being overworked couldan lead to burn out.

Firstly, it is well known that overworkeding could lead to burn out.

On November 2024, The Institute of Global Mental Health published an article about how working more than 8 hours each day, could increase with 50% the chances on developing a mental illness, such as burn out, anxiety and bipolar disorder.


OIn November 2024, Tthe Institute of Global Mental Health published an article about howstating that working more than 8eight hours eacha day, could increase with 50% the chancesthe risk onf developing a mental illness, es—such as burn out, anxiety, and bipolar disorder—by 50%.

OIn November 2024, Tthe Institute of Global Mental Health published an article about how working more than 8 hours eacha day, could increase withby 50% the chances onf developing a mental illness, such as burn out, anxiety, and bipolar disorder.

On this context, I believe that the schedule for nurses should be reduced to 8 hours shifts, and nurses must not be allowed to work more than 12 hours per day.


OIn this context, I believe that the schedule for nursenurses' shifts should be reduclimited to 8eight hours shifts, and nurses must, and they should not be allowed to work more than 12twelve hours per day.

OIn this context, I believe that the schedule for nurses should be reduced to 8 -hours shifts, and nurses must not be allowed to work more than 12 hours per day.

On the other hand, the cost of living and the low payments could lead nurses to work more time, regardless the Institute of Mental Health recommendations.


On the other hand, the high cost of living and the low payments couldlow wages may lead nurses to work more timelonger hours, regardless of the Institute of Mental Health's recommendations.

On the other hand, the cost of living and the low payments could lead nurses to work more time, regardless of the Institute of Mental Health's recommendations.

In those cases, the main purpose for those nurses is to bring enough money to their families.


In thosesuch cases, the main purpose for thosemotivation for nurses is to bringearn enough money to support their families.

In thosesuch cases, the main purpose ofor those nurses is to bring enough money to support their families.

As an example, In Mexico, The Science Institute, interviewed five hundred nurses in a public hospital about how many hours they worked per week the last month and the reason for that.


As anFor example, Iin Mexico, Tthe Science Institute, interviewed five hundred500 nurses inat a public hospital about how many hours they worked per week over the lpast month and the reason for thats why.

As anFor example, Iin Mexico, Tthe Science Institute, interviewed five hundred nurses in a public hospital about how manyon the number of hours they worked per week in the last month and the reasons for that.

The results were that above 60% of the nurses made from 10 to 15 extra hours per week last month.


The results wereshowed that abover 60% of the nurses made fromworked 10 to 15 extra hours per week last month.

The results were that aboveshowed that more than 60% of the nurses made fromworked 10 to 15 extra hours per week last month.

In conclusion, some nurses are not force to work more but they need to, or they want to.


In conclusion, some nurses are not forced to work more hours, but they either need to, or they wantchoose to.

In conclusion, somenot all nurses are not forced to work more, but theysome need to, or theyand some want to.

The main reasons were the following: 50% of the nurses felt the necessity to overwork in order to cover their daily expenses, 30% were been ask for the hospital to stay longer, and 20% did not have a specific reason.


The main reasons were theas followings: 50% of the nurses felt the necessity to overwork in orderextra hours to cover their daily expenses, 30% were been ask forasked by the hospital to stay longer, and 20% dihad not have a specific reason.

The mainprimary reasons were the following: 50% of the nurses felt the necessity to overwork overtime in order to cover their daily expenses, 30% were been ask for the hospital to stay longerasked by the hospital, and 20% did not have any specific reason.

That is why I agree that better working conditions should be added at the health care system over the world in order to prioritize the mental health on nurses regardless external considerations.


That is why I agree thatbelieve better working conditions should be added at theimplemented in health care system overs around the world in order to prioritize thenurses' mental health on nurses, regardless of external considerationfactors.

That is why I agree that better working conditions should be added atinculcated within the health care system overaround the world in order to prioritize the mental health onf nurses regardless of external considerationircumstances.

Warm Regards, Silvia Ch.


Warm Regards,
Silvia Ch.

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