July 8, 2020
Letter to friend
Hello
I haven’t imagined I would send a parcel from Spain but I’m so excited to send it. Except for the cereal, I put some things I want to give for you and friend. I brought the almonds to give people who meet in Spain. I’m happy to give them to you. The yogurt flavor is my favorite.
I’m afraid I couldn’t travel Slovenia but So thankfully I could know you and your country.
We’ve known each other not long enough yet I love talking and spending time with you. Thank you for being my friend. You’re a charming and awesome person. :)
I hope you finish your thesis well and stay safe.
Letter to a friend
"Friend" is a countable noun, so you would use an indefinite article in this case.
Hello,
After a greeting at the beginning of letter, you would add a comma.
If it's a friend, you could also say "Hi," rather than "Hello", which is slightly more formal.
I haven’didn't imagined I would send a parcel from Spain, but I’m so excited to send it.
Except forBesides the cereal, I put someincluded some other things I wanted to give forto you and your friend.
"Except for the cereal" suggests that you did not want to give it to your friend, but included it anyway.
Also, what do you mean by "you and friend"? Is it a friend of the person you're writing to, or are you saying that the person is your friend?
I brought the almonds to give to people who I meet in Spain.
I'm not sure what you mean; who met the people?
I’m happy to give them to you.
The yogurt flavor is my favorite.
I’m afraid I couldn’t travel to Slovenia, but SI'm so thankfully I couldgot to know you and your country.
"To get to know" is a common expression meaning to learn more about something or someone.
Did you get to know them in the past, or are you hoping that you will be able to do so in the future?
We’ve haven't known each other not long enough yefor very long, but I love talking and spending time with you.
Thank you for being my friend.
You’re a charming and awesome person.
:)
I hope you finish your thesis goes well, and stay safe.
Feedback
This letter is very sweet -- I enjoyed reading it!
July 8, 2020
Thank you so much!
July 8, 2020
I haven’didn't imagined I would send a parcel from Spain, but I’m so excited to send it.
this is a good correction; I'm thinking from the context that "I never imagined..." would also be a good fit here
Letter to a friend
Hello,
I haven’didn't imagined I would send a parcel from Spain to you but I’m so excited to send it.
Except forWith the exception of the cereal, I put some things there I want to give forto you and our friend.
I brought the almonds to give to people who I meet in Spain.
I'm not sure how to correct this since it doesn't really make sense. Maybe you could write it in your native language and then I could get more context?
I’m happy to give them to you.
The yogurt flavor is my favorite.
I’m afraid I couldn’an't travel to Slovenia but So thankfully I couldright now, but hopefully I can soon so I can get to know you and your country.
We’ve haven't known each other notfor a long enoughtime yet I love talking and spending time with you.
Thank you for being my friend.
You’re a charming and awesome person.
:)
I hope you finish your thesis well and stay safe.
You would generally use "well" to describe a concrete action, like "I hope you write your thesis well". Finishing a thesis already implies that they already did it well.
July 8, 2020
Thank you so much.
'I brought some almonds to give to people who i would meet in Spain.' (나는 스페인에서 만날 사람들에게 줄 아몬드를 가져왔었어)
Is this correct?
July 8, 2020
^^ The sentence you wrote would probably be the best way to correct that sentence.
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Letter to friend Letter to a friend Letter to a friend "Friend" is a countable noun, so you would use an indefinite article in this case. |
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Hello Hello, Hello, After a greeting at the beginning of letter, you would add a comma. If it's a friend, you could also say "Hi," rather than "Hello", which is slightly more formal. |
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I haven’t imagined I would send a parcel from Spain but I’m so excited to send it. I I |
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Except for the cereal, I put some things I want to give for you and friend.
"Except for the cereal" suggests that you did not want to give it to your friend, but included it anyway. Also, what do you mean by "you and friend"? Is it a friend of the person you're writing to, or are you saying that the person is your friend? |
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I brought the almonds to give people who meet in Spain. I brought the almonds to give to people who I m I'm not sure how to correct this since it doesn't really make sense. Maybe you could write it in your native language and then I could get more context? I brought the almonds to give to people who I m I'm not sure what you mean; who met the people? |
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The yogurt flavor is my favorite. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m afraid I couldn’t travel Slovenia but So thankfully I could know you and your country. I’m afraid I c I’m afraid I couldn’t travel to Slovenia, but "To get to know" is a common expression meaning to learn more about something or someone. Did you get to know them in the past, or are you hoping that you will be able to do so in the future? |
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We’ve known each other not long enough yet I love talking and spending time with you. We We |
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Thank you for being my friend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope you finish your thesis well and stay safe. I hope you finish your thesis You would generally use "well" to describe a concrete action, like "I hope you write your thesis well". Finishing a thesis already implies that they already did it well. I hope |
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