Nov. 23, 2025
Letter to an editor regarding enviromental concerns.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reference to the invitation published in your international magazine regarding environmental concerns. In this letter, I would like to share my views on several environmental issues which should be tackle shortly.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that fossil fuels play a crucial role in greenhouse effect. Tradicional cars burn fuel, and as a result Co2 is released into the atmosphere contributing significantly to climate change. For instance, it is evident that rainny period are shorter and summer are longer than decades ago, leading to droughts and heatwaves. By promoting the used of public transport and funding the purchase of electric vehicles (EVs) the Co2 emissions can be considerably cut back down in a few years time.
Another major concern is the global production of single-use plastic. Most of the items that women and men purcharse in their daily life are made of plastic which at certain point can be recycled. However, recycling is often not affordable for the companies, consequently the vast majority of the plastic are dumped into landfills and oceans, damaging the ecosystem. I would implement a fee to reduce the use of plastic in everyday products. For example, citizes are charged for single-use plastic bags in the supermarket.
Last but not least, I also would like to draw you attention to noise pollution is central areas which has raised concerns among resident. Dense traffic and buildings under construction are sometimes deseperating for resident´s rest. By limiting the use of private cars in city centres and regulating operating hours in the contruction field, the issue can be mitigated.
Yours faithfully,
Miguel
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reference to the invitation published in your international magazine regarding environmental concerns.
In this letter, I would like to share my views on several environmental issues which shouldneed to be tackled shortly.
'need to' adds more urgency than 'should'
First and foremost, it is undeniable that fossil fuels play a crucial role in the greenhouse effect.
Tradictional cars burn fuel, and as a result Co2 is released into the atmosphere contributing significantly to climate change.
For instance, it is evident that rainny periods are shorter and summers are longer than decades ago, leading to droughts and heatwaves.
By promoting the used of public transport and funding the purchase of electric vehicles (EVs) the Co2 emissions can be considerably cut back downut back down considerably in a few years' time.
Another major concern is the global production of single-use plastics.
Most of the items that women and men purcharse in their daily life are made of plastic which at a certain point can be recycled.
However, recycling is often not affordable for the companies, c. Consequently, the vast majority of the plastic areis dumped into landfills and oceans, damaging the ecosystem.
I would implement a fee to reduce the use of plastic in everyday products.
For example, citizens are charged for single-use plastic bags in the supermarket.
Last but not least, I also would like to draw your attention to noise pollution isn central areas which has raised concerns among residents.
Dense traffic and buildings under construction are sometimes deseperating forisrupt the rest of resident´s rests.
By limiting the use of private cars in city centres and regulating operating hours in the construction field, the issue can be mitigated.
Yours faithfully,
Miguel
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Letter to an editor regarding enviromental concerns. |
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I am writing in reference to the invitation published in your international magazine regarding environmental concerns. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In this letter, I would like to share my views on several environmental issues which should be tackle shortly. In this letter, I would like to share my views on several environmental issues which 'need to' adds more urgency than 'should' |
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First and foremost, it is undeniable that fossil fuels play a crucial role in greenhouse effect. First and foremost, it is undeniable that fossil fuels play a crucial role in the greenhouse effect. |
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Tradicional cars burn fuel, and as a result Co2 is released into the atmosphere contributing significantly to climate change. Tradi |
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For instance, it is evident that rainny period are shorter and summer are longer than decades ago, leading to droughts and heatwaves. For instance, it is evident that rain |
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Another major concern is the global production of single-use plastic. Another major concern is the global production of single-use plastics. |
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By promoting the used of public transport and funding the purchase of electric vehicles (EVs) the Co2 emissions can be considerably cut back down in a few years time. By promoting the use |
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Most of the items that women and men purcharse in their daily life are made of plastic which at certain point can be recycled. Most of the items that women and men purcha |
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However, recycling is often not affordable for the companies, consequently the vast majority of the plastic are dumped into landfills and oceans, damaging the ecosystem. However, recycling is often not affordable for |
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I would implement a fee to reduce the use of plastic in everyday products. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, citizes are charged for single-use plastic bags in the supermarket. For example, citizens are charged for single-use plastic bags in the supermarket. |
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Last but not least, I also would like to draw you attention to noise pollution is central areas which has raised concerns among resident. Last but not least, I also would like to draw your attention to noise pollution i |
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Dense traffic and buildings under construction are sometimes deseperating for resident´s rest. Dense traffic and buildings under construction |
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By limiting the use of private cars in city centres and regulating operating hours in the contruction field, the issue can be mitigated. By limiting the use of private cars in city centres and regulating operating hours in the construction field, the issue can be mitigated. |
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Yours faithfully, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Miguel This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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