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July 21, 2020

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Letter to a friend

Hello,
It’s been 4 months since we talked! Time just flied.
I’ve never expected this virus screw all my plans but while I stay in Spain, it was really fun to message and play Minecraft together. 😊 And you helped me a lot! Thank you for being my friend.
I brought this cup to give it to a friend who I would meet in Spain and the friend I want to give this cup is you! In the cup, It’s written my city’s name and one of the most famous district in Busan, Haeundae on the cup. I don’t live in the district and it’s a little far from where I live but there is a beautiful beach and a cinema center I love to watch a movie. It’s a cool place to visit. When you come to Busan, I can bring you wherever you want to go. Haha
I put some flavored almonds and Kimchijeon, too. I hope you enjoy them.
Stay safe and I’ll keep in touch.
Yours truly, (name)

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Letter to a friend

Hello,

It’s been 4 months since we talked!

Time just fliedew.

I’ve never expected this virus screw to all my plans, but while I stayed in Spain, it was really fun to message [you] and play Minecraft together.

"Message" needs an object. "You" makes sense to me based on context, but maybe you have something else in mind.

😊 And you helped me a lot!

Thank you for being my friend.

I brought this cup to give it to a friend who I would meet in Spain and the friend to whom I want to give this cup is you!

IOn the cup, It’s written my city’s name, Busan, and one of the most famous district in Busanit, Haeundae, are written on the cup.

I don’t live in theat district and it’s a little far from where I live, but there is a beautiful beach and a cinema centwhere I love to watch a movies.

"I don't live in the district" is grammatically correct, but "that" is necessary here to make it clear that you are referring to the district mentioned in the last sentence.

It’s a cool place to visit.

When you come to Busan, I can bring you to wherever you want to go.

Haha

I put in some flavored almonds and Kkimchijeon, too.

I hope you enjoy them.

Stay safe and I’ll keep in touch.

Yours truly, (name)

Letter to a friend

Hello,

It’s been 4 months since we talked!

Time justhas flied.

I think has is more natural here

I would have never expected this virus to screw up all my plans but while I stayed in Spain, it was really fun to message and play Minecraft together.

😊 And you helped me a lot!

Thank you for being my friend.

I brought this cup to give it to a friend who I would meet in Spain and the friend I want to give this cup to is you!

In the cup, It’ is written my city’s name and one of the most famous districts in Busan,: Haeundae on the cup.

I don’t live in the district and it’s a little far from where I live but there is a beautiful beach and a cinema centerwhere I love to watch a movie.

We wouldn't say cinema center. Cinema alone suffices.

It’s a cool place to visit.

When you come to Busan, I can bringtake you wherever you want to go.

Haha

I put some flavored almonds and Kimchijeon, too in the cup.

I hope you enjoy them.

Stay safe and I’ll keep in touch.

Yours truly, (name)

It’s a cool place to visit.


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Letter to a friend


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Hello,


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It’s been 4 months since we talked!


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Time just flied.


Time justhas flied.

I think has is more natural here

Time just fliedew.

I’ve never expected this virus screw all my plans but while I stay in Spain, it was really fun to message and play Minecraft together.


I would have never expected this virus to screw up all my plans but while I stayed in Spain, it was really fun to message and play Minecraft together.

I’ve never expected this virus screw to all my plans, but while I stayed in Spain, it was really fun to message [you] and play Minecraft together.

"Message" needs an object. "You" makes sense to me based on context, but maybe you have something else in mind.

😊 And you helped me a lot!


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Thank you for being my friend.


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I brought this cup to give it to a friend who I would meet in Spain and the friend I want to give this cup is you!


I brought this cup to give it to a friend who I would meet in Spain and the friend I want to give this cup to is you!

I brought this cup to give it to a friend who I would meet in Spain and the friend to whom I want to give this cup is you!

In the cup, It’s written my city’s name and one of the most famous district in Busan, Haeundae on the cup.


In the cup, It’ is written my city’s name and one of the most famous districts in Busan,: Haeundae on the cup.

IOn the cup, It’s written my city’s name, Busan, and one of the most famous district in Busanit, Haeundae, are written on the cup.

I don’t live in the district and it’s a little far from where I live but there is a beautiful beach and a cinema center I love to watch a movie.


I don’t live in the district and it’s a little far from where I live but there is a beautiful beach and a cinema centerwhere I love to watch a movie.

We wouldn't say cinema center. Cinema alone suffices.

I don’t live in theat district and it’s a little far from where I live, but there is a beautiful beach and a cinema centwhere I love to watch a movies.

"I don't live in the district" is grammatically correct, but "that" is necessary here to make it clear that you are referring to the district mentioned in the last sentence.

When you come to Busan, I can bring you wherever you want to go.


When you come to Busan, I can bringtake you wherever you want to go.

When you come to Busan, I can bring you to wherever you want to go.

Haha


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I put some flavored almonds and Kimchijeon, too.


I put some flavored almonds and Kimchijeon, too in the cup.

I put in some flavored almonds and Kkimchijeon, too.

I hope you enjoy them.


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Stay safe and I’ll keep in touch.


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Yours truly, (name)


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