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Letter about my two weeks in a language school in Germany

Hi Richard,
I have just come back to Spain after two amazing weeks in Ingolstadt (Germany). I have enroled to a German course in an interesting school in the city centre. They organise everything so you don’t need to worry about stuff like papers, looking for a renting,...
When you get to the airport, you find the typical picture of two people (assistant of the school) raising a sign with your surname and then they accompany you to your flat. In my way to the place, they informed me about some events and parties that took place during my stay. As you can see at this point, the school looks like a travel agency. I would recommend it to everyone interested in get to know Germany and doing a quick sightseeing about the country, especially if you are considering living here in the near future.
Regarding their main role as school, I’d rather an intensive course, since I have no chance to learn beyond the basics. You know, greets and give a little presentation about myself. Apart from that, the classes were a bit boring. We basically repeated the same phrases all the time. Besides, the school is expensive, it costs 1000 € (extra services I mentioned above are not included).
Well, despite the drawbacks highlighted earlier, I would highly recommend you to try it. It is an unforgettable experience and would help anyone to open their mind.
Take care, I hope to meet you soon to tell you some funny anecdotes about my stay here.
Isaac


You have spent two weeks at a language school in another country. While you were there, you
lived in student accommodation, attended language classes, and took part in social activities
organised by the school. A friend of yours has written to you asking whether you would
recommend the school. Write a letter to your friend identifying which aspects of the school
you were happy with, explaining which aspects were disappointing, and saying whether you
would recommend the school.

Write your letter. You do not need to include postal addresses.

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They organise everything, so you don’t need to worry about stuff like papers, looking for a renting,al, and so on...

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Regarding their main role as school, I’d rathprefer an intensive course, since I haved no chance to learn beyond the basics.

Don't forget past tense because you mentioned you were back in Spain at the start of the letter :)

You know, greetsing and giveing a little presentation about myself.

Besides, the school is expensive, it costs 1000 € (the extra services I mentioned above are not included).

Well, despite the drawbacks highlightI mentioned earlier, I would highly recommend that you to try it out.

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Letter about my two weeks in a language school in Germany

Hi Richard,

I have just come backreturned to Spain after two amazing weeks in Ingolstadt (Germany).

I have enrolled toin a German course, in an interesting school in the city centre.

They organise everything so you don’t need to worry about stuff like papers, or looking for a rentingn appartment ,...

When you get to the airport, you find the typical picture ofsee two people (assistants of the school) raisholding a sign with your surname and then they accompany you to your flat.

IOn my way to the pflacet, they informetold me about some events and parties that tookwould take place during my stay.

As you can see at this point, the school looks like a travel agency.

I would recommend it to everyone interested in get to know Germany and doing a quick sightseeing abroutnd the country, especially if you are considering living here in the near future.

Regarding their main role as school, I’d rather do an intensive course, since I have no chance to learn beyondwould be able to learn more than just the basics.

You know, a greetsing and then give a little presentation about myself.

Apart from that, the classes were a bit boring.

We basically repeated the same phrases all the time.

BesidesFurthermore, the school is expensive, it costs 1000 € (thé extra services I mentioned above are not included).

WellAnyway, despite the drawbacks highlighted earlier, I would highly recommend that you to try it.

It is an unforgettable experience and would help anyone to open their mind.

You could use anyone or everyone or just one

Take care, I hope to meet you soon to tell you some funny anecdotes about my stay there.

Isaac

Letter about my two weeks in a language school in Germany

Hi Richard,

I have just come backreturned to Spain after two amazing weeks in Ingolstadt, (Germany).

I have enrolled toin a German course inat an interesting school in the city centre.

They organise everything so you don’t need to worry about stuff like papers, or looking for a renting,...dorm.

When you get to the airport, you find the typical picture of two people (assistants of the school) raising a sign with your surname on it and then they accompany you to your flat.

IOn my way to the place, they informed me about some events and parties that tookwere going to take place during my stay.

I would recommend it to everyone interested in getting to know Germany and doing asome quick sightseeing abroutnd the country, especially if you are considering living there in the near future.

Regarding their main role as a school, I’d rather attend an intensive course, since I haved no chance to learn beyond the basics.

You know, greetings and giveing a little presentation about myself.

Apart from that, the classes were a bit boring.

We basically repeated the same phrases all the time.

Besides, the school is expensive, i. It costs 1000 € (extra services I mentioned above are not included).

Well, dDespite the drawbacks highlighted earlier, I would highly recommend you to try it.

It is an unforgettable experience and would help anyone to open their mind.

Take care, I hope to meet you soon to tell you some funny anecdotes about my stay here.

Isaac

Letter about my two weeks in a language school in Germany


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I have just come back to Spain after two amazing weeks in Ingolstadt (Germany).


I have just come backreturned to Spain after two amazing weeks in Ingolstadt, (Germany).

I have just come backreturned to Spain after two amazing weeks in Ingolstadt (Germany).

I have enroled to a German course in an interesting school in the city centre.


I have enrolled toin a German course inat an interesting school in the city centre.

I have enrolled toin a German course, in an interesting school in the city centre.

I haveWhen I was there, I enrolled myself into a German course inat an interesting school in the city centre.

They organise everything so you don’t need to worry about stuff like papers, looking for a renting,...


They organise everything so you don’t need to worry about stuff like papers, or looking for a renting,...dorm.

They organise everything so you don’t need to worry about stuff like papers, or looking for a rentingn appartment ,...

They organise everything, so you don’t need to worry about stuff like papers, looking for a renting,al, and so on...

When you get to the airport, you find the typical picture of two people (assistant of the school) raising a sign with your surname and then they accompany you to your flat.


When you get to the airport, you find the typical picture of two people (assistants of the school) raising a sign with your surname on it and then they accompany you to your flat.

When you get to the airport, you find the typical picture ofsee two people (assistants of the school) raisholding a sign with your surname and then they accompany you to your flat.

When you get to the airport, you find the typical picturimage of two people (assistant of the school) raisone is a school assistant) holding a sign with your surname and then they accompany you to your flat.

In my way to the place, they informed me about some events and parties that took place during my stay.


IOn my way to the place, they informed me about some events and parties that tookwere going to take place during my stay.

IOn my way to the pflacet, they informetold me about some events and parties that tookwould take place during my stay.

IOn my way to the place, they informetold me about some events and parties that tookwould take place during my stay.

As you can see at this point, the school looks like a travel agency.


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I would recommend it to everyone interested in get to know Germany and doing a quick sightseeing about the country, especially if you are considering living here in the near future.


I would recommend it to everyone interested in getting to know Germany and doing asome quick sightseeing abroutnd the country, especially if you are considering living there in the near future.

I would recommend it to everyone interested in get to know Germany and doing a quick sightseeing abroutnd the country, especially if you are considering living here in the near future.

I would recommend it to everyone interested in getting to know Germany andbetter, or in doing a quick sightseeing abouttour around the country, especially if you are considering living there in the near future.

Regarding their main role as school, I’d rather an intensive course, since I have no chance to learn beyond the basics.


Regarding their main role as a school, I’d rather attend an intensive course, since I haved no chance to learn beyond the basics.

Regarding their main role as school, I’d rather do an intensive course, since I have no chance to learn beyondwould be able to learn more than just the basics.

Regarding their main role as school, I’d rathprefer an intensive course, since I haved no chance to learn beyond the basics.

Don't forget past tense because you mentioned you were back in Spain at the start of the letter :)

You know, greets and give a little presentation about myself.


You know, greetings and giveing a little presentation about myself.

You know, a greetsing and then give a little presentation about myself.

You know, greetsing and giveing a little presentation about myself.

Apart from that, the classes were a bit boring.


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We basically repeated the same phrases all the time.


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Besides, the school is expensive, it costs 1000 € (extra services I mentioned above are not included).


Besides, the school is expensive, i. It costs 1000 € (extra services I mentioned above are not included).

BesidesFurthermore, the school is expensive, it costs 1000 € (thé extra services I mentioned above are not included).

Besides, the school is expensive, it costs 1000 € (the extra services I mentioned above are not included).

Well, despite the drawbacks highlighted earlier, I would highly recommend you to try it.


Well, dDespite the drawbacks highlighted earlier, I would highly recommend you to try it.

WellAnyway, despite the drawbacks highlighted earlier, I would highly recommend that you to try it.

Well, despite the drawbacks highlightI mentioned earlier, I would highly recommend that you to try it out.

It is an unforgettable experience and would help anyone to open their mind.


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It is an unforgettable experience and would help anyone to open their mind.

You could use anyone or everyone or just one

Take care, I hope to meet you soon to tell you some funny anecdotes about my stay here.


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Take care, I hope to meet you soon to tell you some funny anecdotes about my stay there.

Isaac


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