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courageuse19

Jan. 6, 2022

2
Letter.

Hi,

There are a long time no write you. I thought you was busy or you took a trip or something.

I would like to share what I did for a long time with you.

I want to tell you, I work very hard, day after day. I listen to a story in English, I listen

also another video. I learn and I keep the vocabulary by heart.I write a lot. I speak with myself and I look at the mirror. I take care your advice. I 'm proud

of myself.


I want to thank you for helping me. I want to say you I'm ready to speak with on Skype one day, if you are available.

Corrections

Hi,

There are a long time no write yousee.

"long time no see" is often used even if you are not literally seeing someone, but "long time no write" could also be used.

I thought you wasere busy or you took a trip or something.

I would like to share what I did for a longduring this time with you.

I assume you mean what you did while you weren't in contact with the other person.

I want to tell you, I work very hard, day after day.

Not necessary to repeat

I listened to a story in English, I listenalso watched

Past tense

also another video.

I learn and I keepremember the vocabulary by heart. I write a lot.

I speak with myself and I look atin front of the mirror.

Sounds more natural, it is one activity that you do in a certain place, rather than two activities that you do separately.

I take careook your advice.

I 'm proud

I want to say you I'm ready to speak with on Skype one day, if you are available.

No need to repeat again.

courageuse19's avatar
courageuse19

Jan. 7, 2022

2

Thanks a bunch.

Letter.


Hi,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are a long time no write you.


There are a long time no write yousee.

"long time no see" is often used even if you are not literally seeing someone, but "long time no write" could also be used.

I thought you was busy or you took a trip or something.


I thought you wasere busy or you took a trip or something.

I would like to share what I did for a long time with you.


I would like to share what I did for a longduring this time with you.

I assume you mean what you did while you weren't in contact with the other person.

I want to tell you, I work very hard, day after day.


I want to tell you, I work very hard, day after day.

Not necessary to repeat

I listen to a story in English, I listen


I listened to a story in English, I listenalso watched

Past tense

also another video.


also another video.

I learn and I keep the vocabulary by heart.I write a lot.


I learn and I keepremember the vocabulary by heart. I write a lot.

I speak with myself and I look at the mirror.


I speak with myself and I look atin front of the mirror.

Sounds more natural, it is one activity that you do in a certain place, rather than two activities that you do separately.

I take care your advice.


I take careook your advice.

I 'm proud


I 'm proud

of myself.


I want to thank you for helping me.


I want to say you I'm ready to speak with on Skype one day, if you are available.


I want to say you I'm ready to speak with on Skype one day, if you are available.

No need to repeat again.

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