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courageuse19

Jan. 5, 2022

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Hi dear,


How are your mother and you? I hope you are as well.

I want to tell you what I did yesterday in the evening. Well, i learned a new lessons in Spanish, it was very intereste! In this lesson, there are many new words, so I need to make in the sentences. I think that the best method to improve skill writing.

I read also the chapter two is "Lowood scholl" of Jane Eyre. I understood all the chapter, but I have to read more again,because there are many words what I have to look up in the dictionary. I think I work very hard.

I spoke with a friend in Skype and she helped me to correct a sentence in Spanish.

Then, I prayed and read one verse of the Quran.

I don't use a translate since six days. I'm proud of myself.

NB/Don't forget our dreams.

Have a nice day!

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Letter

Hi dear,

How are you and your mother and you(doing)?

I hope you are as well.

I want to tell you about what I did yesterday in the evening.

Well, i learned a new lessons in Spanish, iI had a new Spanish lesson. It was very interesteing!

In this lesson, tThere awere many new words in this lesson, so I need to make in thwrite sentences.

I think that's the best method/way to improve skillmy writing skills.

I read also the chapter two iof Jane Eyre's "Lowood scholl" of Jane Eyre.

I understood all ththe whole chapter, but I have to read moreit again, because there are so many words wthat I have to look up in the dictionary.

I think I work very hard.

I spoke with a friend in Skype and she helped me to correct a sentence in Spanish.

Then, I prayed and read one verse of the Quran.

I dohaven't used a translate sinceor for six days.

I'm proud of myself.

NB/Don't forget our dreams.

Have a nice day!

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Well done! :)

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courageuse19

Jan. 5, 2022

2

Thanks a bunch for your corrections.

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Hi dear,


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How are your mother and you?


How are you and your mother and you(doing)?

I hope you are as well.


I hope you are as well.

I want to tell you what I did yesterday in the evening.


I want to tell you about what I did yesterday in the evening.

Well, i learned a new lessons in Spanish, it was very intereste!


Well, i learned a new lessons in Spanish, iI had a new Spanish lesson. It was very interesteing!

In this lesson, there are many new words, so I need to make in the sentences.


In this lesson, tThere awere many new words in this lesson, so I need to make in thwrite sentences.

I think that the best method to improve skill writing.


I think that's the best method/way to improve skillmy writing skills.

I read also the chapter two is "Lowood scholl" of Jane Eyre.


I read also the chapter two iof Jane Eyre's "Lowood scholl" of Jane Eyre.

I understood all the chapter, but I have to read more again,because there are many words what I have to look up in the dictionary.


I understood all ththe whole chapter, but I have to read moreit again, because there are so many words wthat I have to look up in the dictionary.

I think I work very hard.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I spoke with a friend in Skype and she helped me to correct a sentence in Spanish.


I spoke with a friend in Skype and she helped me to correct a sentence in Spanish.

Then, I prayed and read one verse of the Quran.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't use a translate since six days.


I dohaven't used a translate sinceor for six days.

I'm proud of myself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

NB/Don't forget our dreams.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Have a nice day!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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