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courageuse19

Jan. 4, 2022

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Hi dear!

I want to tell you what I did this morning. Well, After woke up at eight o'colock.I took a cup of lemon and tea. I didn't have a breakfast.

Then, I combed my hair. I prayed. I read one souret" el tine wa zaytoune" of the Qu'uran.

I reviewed some lessons in Spanish. I think that is not enough. I need to practice with other person.

Yesterdad, I respected my plans of my day. I watched a move in English. Yes, I understood,but not all what they spoke. I just understood like: Don't give up!, I will do...etc.

I aalos listened to a story on YouTube, chapter one. I really understood it. I didn't neet to look up in the dictionary. I did a summary about the chapter one. I'm so happy about it!

My plans for today: I will read the chapter tow ,the story about Jane Eyre. and I will also write a text in English and in Spanish too. I will send message to my friends in Skype.

I'm used to thank to God for everything.

Don't forgot,I'm dertirmined to achieve what I want.

Have a nice day!

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Hi dear!

Can also be "Hi dear,"

Well, AfterI woke up at eight o'colock.I took and had a cup of lemon and teatea with lemon.

I didn't have a breakfast.

I read one souret " el tine wa zaytoune" of the Qu'uran.

Not sure what a souret is - perhaps a word that fits is "verse"?

I reviewed some lessons in Spanish, but I do not think that is not enough.

I think that is not enough.

I need to practice with another person.

Yesterdady, I respectfollowed my plans ofor my day.

I watched a movie in English.

Yes, I understood,but not all parts of what they spoke but not everything.

I just understood phrases like: "Don't give up!, " and "I will do...etc."

I aaloslso listened to a story on YouTube, chapter one.

Unclear by what you mean when you write "chapter one"
If it is a video with the title "Chapter One," you can write "a story on Youtube called "Chapter One."
If it is a series of videos, and you had watched the first part of the series, you can write "a story on Youtube; it's the first part of (put name of series here)."

I didn't neetd to look up anything in the dictionary.

I did a summary about the chapter one.

Can also say: I did a summary of the first chapter.

My plans for today: I will include reading the second chapter tow ,in the story about Jane Eyre and writing a text in English and Spanish.

and I will also write a text in English and in Spanish too.

Combined with first sentence for brevity

I will send messages to my friends ion Skype.

Can also say: I will message my friends on Skype.

I'm used to thanking to God for everything.

Don't forgoet, I'm dertitermined to achieve what I want.

Can replace "what I want" with "my goals"

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courageuse19

Jan. 4, 2022

2

Thanks a bunch.

Letter

Hi dear!

I want to tell you what I did this morning.

Well, Aafter I woke up at eight o'colock. I took a cup of lemon and tea.

I didn't have a breakfast.

Then, I combed my hair.

I prayed.

I read one souret" el tine wa zaytoune" of the Qu'uran.

Not sure what a souret is.

I reviewed some lessons in Spanish.

I think that is not enough.

I need to practice with other personople.

I need to practice with another person. (singular -> specifically to practice with 1 person)
I need to practice with other people. (plural -> practice with people in general)

Yesterdady, I respected my plans of my day.

What does it mean to respect your plans?

I watched a movie in English.

Yes, I understood, most but not all of what they spoke.

I just understood liksome parts of what they said. For example: Don't give up!, I will do...etc.

I aaloslso listened to a story on YouTube, chapter one.

I really understood it.

I didn't neetd to look up in the dictionary.

I didwrote a summary about the chapter one.

I'm so happy aboutwith it!

be happy with = be satisfied with something you possess or have experienced
be happy about = be pleased by; be glad that something happened

My plans for today: I will read the chapter tow ,wo, the story about Jane Eyre.

and I will also write a text in English and in Spanish too.

I will send message to my friends in Skype.

I'm used to thank to God for everything.

Don't forgot, I'm dertitermined to achieve what I want.

courageuse19's avatar
courageuse19

Jan. 4, 2022

2

Thanks a bunch.

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Hi dear!


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Hi dear!

Can also be "Hi dear,"

I want to tell you what I did this morning.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, After woke up at eight o'colock.I took a cup of lemon and tea.


Well, Aafter I woke up at eight o'colock. I took a cup of lemon and tea.

Well, AfterI woke up at eight o'colock.I took and had a cup of lemon and teatea with lemon.

I didn't have a breakfast.


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I didn't have a breakfast.

Then, I combed my hair.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I prayed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I read one souret" el tine wa zaytoune" of the Qu'uran.


I read one souret" el tine wa zaytoune" of the Qu'uran.

Not sure what a souret is.

I read one souret " el tine wa zaytoune" of the Qu'uran.

Not sure what a souret is - perhaps a word that fits is "verse"?

I reviewed some lessons in Spanish.


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I reviewed some lessons in Spanish, but I do not think that is not enough.

I think that is not enough.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think that is not enough.

I need to practice with other person.


I need to practice with other personople.

I need to practice with another person. (singular -> specifically to practice with 1 person) I need to practice with other people. (plural -> practice with people in general)

I need to practice with another person.

Yesterdad, I respected my plans of my day.


Yesterdady, I respected my plans of my day.

What does it mean to respect your plans?

Yesterdady, I respectfollowed my plans ofor my day.

I watched a move in English.


I watched a movie in English.

I watched a movie in English.

Yes, I understood,but not all what they spoke.


Yes, I understood, most but not all of what they spoke.

Yes, I understood,but not all parts of what they spoke but not everything.

I just understood like: Don't give up!, I will do...etc.


I just understood liksome parts of what they said. For example: Don't give up!, I will do...etc.

I just understood phrases like: "Don't give up!, " and "I will do...etc."

I aalos listened to a story on YouTube, chapter one.


I aaloslso listened to a story on YouTube, chapter one.

I aaloslso listened to a story on YouTube, chapter one.

Unclear by what you mean when you write "chapter one" If it is a video with the title "Chapter One," you can write "a story on Youtube called "Chapter One." If it is a series of videos, and you had watched the first part of the series, you can write "a story on Youtube; it's the first part of (put name of series here)."

I really understood it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't neet to look up in the dictionary.


I didn't neetd to look up in the dictionary.

I didn't neetd to look up anything in the dictionary.

I did a summary about the chapter one.


I didwrote a summary about the chapter one.

I did a summary about the chapter one.

Can also say: I did a summary of the first chapter.

I'm so happy about it!


I'm so happy aboutwith it!

be happy with = be satisfied with something you possess or have experienced be happy about = be pleased by; be glad that something happened

My plans for today: I will read the chapter tow ,the story about Jane Eyre.


My plans for today: I will read the chapter tow ,wo, the story about Jane Eyre.

My plans for today: I will include reading the second chapter tow ,in the story about Jane Eyre and writing a text in English and Spanish.

and I will also write a text in English and in Spanish too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

and I will also write a text in English and in Spanish too.

Combined with first sentence for brevity

I will send message to my friends in Skype.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will send messages to my friends ion Skype.

Can also say: I will message my friends on Skype.

I'm used to thank to God for everything.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm used to thanking to God for everything.

Don't forgot,I'm dertirmined to achieve what I want.


Don't forgot, I'm dertitermined to achieve what I want.

Don't forgoet, I'm dertitermined to achieve what I want.

Can replace "what I want" with "my goals"

Have a nice day!


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