Jan. 3, 2022
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Hi dear!
I was going to be on Skype,Sunddely,there was not The Internet.I'm so sorry for that!
What have you been doing this weekend? -howe is your mother?
As for me,Today I called someperson to ask about the phone. I have discovered the
most phone sold in the shop are used.
It's true,there are a lot of the other phones; like Oppo,Redmi...ect
Yes, it's exist too much,but in terms of stockage and other things,it's too bad for me.
I can buy the phone expensive,but I prefer use my money For my daily and monthly dues.
I will share about other phone and I will take your advice about Sumsung s10.
My Mother is a littel well and my sisters are well.
I think about your mother. I don't konw why?
I Hope to see him. God willing!
Don't forgot,we will achieve our dream.
I was goingmeant to be on Skype,Sun but suddenly, there was not The I internet. I'm so sorry for that!
What have you been doing this weekend?
-hHowe is your mother?
because you already ended the sentence before, you can not use ‘-‘
As for me,T today I called somepersone to ask about the phone.
i think that some person is correct grammatically, but no one says it, only in rare situations, so native speakers all say ‘someone’
I have discovered theat
most phones sold in the shop are used.
since you said ‘most’ that means that the following word will be a plural, so to make ‘phone’ plural, you just add on an ‘s’ ! :)
It's true, there are a lot of the other phones; like ; Oppo, Redmi...ectc.
Yes, it's existthere are too muchany,but in terms of stockrage and other things, it's too bad for me.
i don’t understand what you were trying to say here, but i think you were talking about the phone choices? so i corrected it thinking about that.
I canould buy the phone expensive, but I would prefer to use my money Ffor my daily and monthly dufees.
I will share with you about that other phone, and I will take your advice about Suthe Samsung s10.
My Mother is a littele well and my sisters are well. too.
I don't konow why?
I Hhope to see him.er.
mother is a woman, so it’s ‘her’ instead of ‘him’
Don't forgoet, we will achieve our dream.
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well done, this is all really good! just some mistakes in the tenses and usage of words, but this all amazing! :))
Jan. 5, 2022
Thanks a bunch.
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Hi dear! |
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I was going to be on Skype,Sunddely,there was not The Internet.I'm so sorry for that! I was |
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What have you been doing this weekend? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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-howe is your mother?
because you already ended the sentence before, you can not use ‘-‘ |
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As for me,Today I called someperson to ask about the phone. As for me, i think that some person is correct grammatically, but no one says it, only in rare situations, so native speakers all say ‘someone’ |
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I have discovered the I have discovered th |
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most phone sold in the shop are used. most phones sold in the shop are used. since you said ‘most’ that means that the following word will be a plural, so to make ‘phone’ plural, you just add on an ‘s’ ! :) |
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It's true,there are a lot of the other phones; like Oppo,Redmi...ect It's true, there are a lot of |
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Yes, it's exist too much,but in terms of stockage and other things,it's too bad for me. Yes, i don’t understand what you were trying to say here, but i think you were talking about the phone choices? so i corrected it thinking about that. |
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I can buy the phone expensive,but I prefer use my money For my daily and monthly dues. I c |
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I will share about other phone and I will take your advice about Sumsung s10. I will share with you about that other phone, and I will take your advice about |
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My Mother is a littel well and my sisters are well. My Mother is a litt |
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I think about your mother. |
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I don't konw why? I don't k |
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I Hope to see him. I mother is a woman, so it’s ‘her’ instead of ‘him’ |
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God willing! |
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Don't forgot,we will achieve our dream. Don't forg |
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