Jan. 1, 2022
Letter
Hi dear!
How to start the first day of the new year? I hope this year ours. we will achieve our dream.
Yesterday we had spend a beautiful time with my family. My brother had order a dinner and cake. It's a nice evening!
Then, I read the Qu'uran and pray.
I hope you are doing well? Did your children call you and did you call your mother?
Today,I waited you on Skype for a few minutes. I think you forget or you was tired. Please, don't worry about it!
This evening, I I talked with a friend and we change our wish of the new year. I also send messages every friends.
Have a nice day!
Letter
Hi dear!
How to start the first day of the new year?
I hope this year will be ours.
I’m not sure what you meant here, but you would use “will be” in a future tense because you’re hoping for something.
wWe will achieve our dreams.
The ‘we’ should be capitalized. The “dreams” should be plural because all of us have different dreams.
Yesterday we had spend a beautifulI spent time with my family.
Instead of “we,” the correct pronoun should be “I” because you spent time with your family. The simple past tense for spend is “spent.” “Beautiful time” isn’t grammatically correct.
My brother had order aed dinner and a cake.
The past tense of “order” is “ordered.”
Dinner doesn’t have an article because dinner can be many things. But, a cake is one thing, so it’s “a cake.”
It's a was nice evening!
If you are talking about the day of the dinner, it should be “it was” because this happened in the past.
Then, I read the Qu'uran and pray.ed.
The past tense of “pray” is “prayed.”
I hope you are doing well?
Did your children call you and did you call your mother?
Today, I waited for you on Skype for a few minutes.
You always have to say “waited for” something.
I think you forget ot or you wasere tired.
The past tense of “forget” is “forgot” and the past tense of “was” is “were.”
Please, don't worry about it!
This evening, I I talked with a friend and we changed our wish of the new year.
The past tense of “change” is “changed.”
I also sendt messages everto all of my friends.
“Send” should be in past tense because you did this in the past. You have to add “to” whenever you say “sent to.” Finally, if you meant every single one of your friends, then saying “all of my friends” is easier.
Have a nice day!
Feedback
You sounded like you had a wonderful night—thank you for sharing with us. Your writing made sense, but there was a few errors with past tense. Since this story took place in the past you should use past tense for every verb. Great job and Inshallah we will have a good new year.
Jan. 1, 2022
Thank you very much and happy new year!
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I hope this year ours. I hope this year will be ours. I’m not sure what you meant here, but you would use “will be” in a future tense because you’re hoping for something. |
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we will achieve our dream.
The ‘we’ should be capitalized. The “dreams” should be plural because all of us have different dreams. |
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Yesterday we had spend a beautiful time with my family. Yesterday Instead of “we,” the correct pronoun should be “I” because you spent time with your family. The simple past tense for spend is “spent.” “Beautiful time” isn’t grammatically correct. |
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My brother had order a dinner and cake. My brother had order The past tense of “order” is “ordered.” Dinner doesn’t have an article because dinner can be many things. But, a cake is one thing, so it’s “a cake.” |
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It's a nice evening! It If you are talking about the day of the dinner, it should be “it was” because this happened in the past. |
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Then, I read the Qu'uran and pray. Then, I read the Qu'uran and pray The past tense of “pray” is “prayed.” |
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I hope you are doing well? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Did your children call you and did you call your mother? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today,I waited you on Skype for a few minutes. Today, I waited for you on Skype for a few minutes. You always have to say “waited for” something. |
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I think you forget or you was tired. I think you forg The past tense of “forget” is “forgot” and the past tense of “was” is “were.” |
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This evening, I I talked with a friend and we change our wish of the new year. This evening, I The past tense of “change” is “changed.” |
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I also send messages every friends. I also sen “Send” should be in past tense because you did this in the past. You have to add “to” whenever you say “sent to.” Finally, if you meant every single one of your friends, then saying “all of my friends” is easier. |
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