Sept. 6, 2022
Hi Mark,
Thank you so much each word you had said about me. I really appreciate it!
I do not need to thank me every time, you are really good person and you have the values...So I think you deserve I pray for you and some people who needs my pray.
I am so happy to hear your news, I also read your happiness between lines of email,that sounds you are happy. It's good to have own appartment.Don't worry if your appartment is unfurnished. Try to buy a few things necessary to use them in a daily life.It's also good idea your kids will be staying with you,however, I think it's a big responsability... Please, when you will live in your new appartment ...think positive and think positive will happens!!!
I know the history , geography and a few culture of your country. Whatever your belief, you have to pray and to thank God for anything and anything...If you feel not good..you should pray especially at night because God hear us every time and any where when we need him.
Yes, I will wait to talk over Skype with you...
You have asked me about Smartphone...I didn't buy it yet,because my city who I live there is no opportunity to buy as I like and also is so expensive. Nerertheless, I will buy one soon.
Don't thank me for my call...It's normal behaivour and I don't care of the cost. I just have called you to know your news.
On my side, I am still help my sister, however I asked her, it's time to come back because Iam affraid if I make a mistake.i try to make sure all thing works well.
Actually my heath, I don't take care of myself, however, I feel sometimes good and other day on the contrary. It's life and I satisfied with every thing!!!!
I hope my email finds you well and also your children.
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Hi Mark,
Thank you so much for each word you had said about me.
IYou do not need to thank me every time, you are a really good person and youalso have thegood values...So I think you deserve I pray for you and some people who needs my prayers.
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It's good to have your own appartment. Don't worry if your appartment is unfurnished.
Try to buy a few things necessary to use them in a daily life. It's also a good idea that your kids will be staying with you, however, I think it's a big responsaibility...
Please, when you will live in your new appartment, ...think positive and think positivethings. When you think positive things, then positive things will happens!!!
I know the history , geography and a fewlittle bit about the culture of your country.
Whatever your belief, you have to pray and to thank God for anything and anything... If you don't feel not good.., you should pray, especially at night because. God hears us every time and any where when we need him.
Yes, I will wait to talk over Skype with you...
You have asked me about Smartphone...s. I didn't buy itone yet, because my city who I live there ihas no opportunity to buy aswhat I like and also is sot is also very expensive.
Don't thank me for my call... It's normal behaivouvior and I don't care ofabout the cost.
On my side, I am still help my sister, however I asked her, it's time to when she would come back because I am affraid if Ito make a mistake.i I try to make sure all thing works well out.
Actuallys for my heath, I don't take care of myself, however, I feel sometimes good and other day on the contrary.
It's life and I'm satisfied with every thing!!!!
I hope my email finds you well and alsoand your children well.
Feedback
This was a good post, but had a lot of grammatical errors. However, please keep writing and I'm confident you will improve!
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Hi, Mark,
Thank you so much for each and every word you had said about me.
I really appreciate it!
I do not need to thank mes every time, because you are a really good person and you have the values...S so I think you deserve Ia pray for you and some people who needs my prayer from me.
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I am so happy to hear your news,. I also read your happiness between the lines of the email,that sound which means you are happy.
It's good to have your own appartment. Don't worry if your appartment is unfurnished.
Try to buy a few things necessary things to use them in a daily life. It's also a good idea that your kids will be staying with you, however, I think it's a big responsaibility...
Please, whilen you will live in your new appartment, ...think positive and think positive will happens!!!
I know the history , geography and a fewsome culture of your country.
Whatever your beliefs, you have to pray and to thank God for anything and aneverything... If you don't feel not good.., you should pray especially at night because God hears us every time and any where when we need hHim.
Yes, I will wait to talk over Skype with you...
You have asked me about Sa smartphone...I didn't buy it I haven't bought one yet, because my city who I live there is no opportunity to buy asone I like and it's also is so expensive in the city where I live.
Nerertheless, I will buy one soon.
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I just have called you to knowto hear your news.
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Actually, regarding my heath, I don't take care of myself, however, but I feel good sometimes good andand the other day on the contrarywas an exception.
It's life and I'm satisfied with every thing!!!!
I hope my email finds you well and alsoand your children well.
Feedback
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Whatever your belief, you have to pray and to thank God for anything and anything...If you feel not good..you should pray especially at night because God hear us every time and any where when we need him. Whatever your beliefs, you have to pray and Whatever your belief, you have to pray and to thank God for anything |
Yes, I will wait to talk over Skype with you... Yes, I will wait to talk over Skype with you. Yes, I will wait to talk over Skype with you. |
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Don't thank me for my call...It's normal behaivour and I don't care of the cost.
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On my side, I am still help my sister, however I asked her, it's time to come back because Iam affraid if I make a mistake.i try to make sure all thing works well. O On my side, I |
Actually my heath, I don't take care of myself, however, I feel sometimes good and other day on the contrary. Actually, regarding my heath, I don't take care of myself A |
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