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courageuse19

Jan. 14, 2022

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Hi dear,


Yesterday , my older sister was coming for stay with us for two days. My nices and my

nephew were so happy to see her.

Today, I have spent time with her, she has talked about his boss...etc.

Yesterday, I reviewed ther present perfect and I did three excercices. I understood it

well, but I always have difficulties when I wrote a letter. I made mistakes.

I would like to say, I always read short and long texte in English. I also read your letter

and especialy I keep your words, but I have no getting results.That's all for today.

I will send you an e-mail this evening.

Have a nice day!

Corrections

Letter

Hi dDear,

Always capitalize "Dear" when you start a letter.

Yesterday , mMy older sister wais coming for stay with us for two days.

You could also say, "Yesterday, I learned that my older sister will be coming to stay with us for two days."

My nieces and my

Today, I haveI spent time with her, today, and she has talked about his boss...etcer job and her boss, among other things.

This sentence doesn't need to be in present perfect, but you can use it if you want to!
I also added "her job and her boss" for more clarity about what you and your sister talked about.

Yesterday, I reviewed ther present perfect tense and I did three excercicses.

I understood it

well, but I always have difficulties when I wroite a letter.

I made mistakes.

I would like to say, I always read short and long textes in English.

I also read your letter

and especially I keep your words, but I have not been getting results. That's all for today.

I will send you an e-mail this evening.

Have a nice day!

Feedback

Well done!

Hi dDear,

Yesterday , my older sister was coming forcame to stay with us for two days.

My nices and my

nephew were so happy to see her.

Today, I have spent time with her, she has talked about hiser boss...etc.

Yesterday, I reviewed ther present perfect and I did three excercices.

well, but I always have difficulties when I wroteiting a letter.

I madke mistakes.

I would like to say, I always read short and long textes in English.

I also read your letter

and especialy I keep your words, but I have no getting results.That's all for today.

I will send you an e-mail this evening.

Have a nice day!

Feedback

Nice job!

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Hi dear,


Hi dDear,

Hi dDear,

Always capitalize "Dear" when you start a letter.

Yesterday , my older sister was coming for stay with us for two days.


Yesterday , my older sister was coming forcame to stay with us for two days.

Yesterday , mMy older sister wais coming for stay with us for two days.

You could also say, "Yesterday, I learned that my older sister will be coming to stay with us for two days."

My nices and my


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My nieces and my

nephew were so happy to see her.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, I have spent time with her, she has talked about his boss...etc.


Today, I have spent time with her, she has talked about hiser boss...etc.

Today, I haveI spent time with her, today, and she has talked about his boss...etcer job and her boss, among other things.

This sentence doesn't need to be in present perfect, but you can use it if you want to! I also added "her job and her boss" for more clarity about what you and your sister talked about.

Yesterday, I reviewed ther present perfect and I did three excercices.


Yesterday, I reviewed ther present perfect and I did three excercices.

Yesterday, I reviewed ther present perfect tense and I did three excercicses.

I understood it


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well, but I always have difficulties when I wrote a letter.


well, but I always have difficulties when I wroteiting a letter.

well, but I always have difficulties when I wroite a letter.

I made mistakes.


I madke mistakes.

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I would like to say, I always read short and long texte in English.


I would like to say, I always read short and long textes in English.

I would like to say, I always read short and long textes in English.

I also read your letter


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

and especialy I keep your words, but I have no getting results.That's all for today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

and especially I keep your words, but I have not been getting results. That's all for today.

I will send you an e-mail this evening.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Have a nice day!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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