yesterday
Let's Shine!
Generally, I prefer sunrise because I think the best way to start the day is to watch the sunrise. I like both, and often recommended to watch them for a better
circadian rhythm. Maybe it's true, maybe not, but I like to see them if I actually can. Of course I won't get up early because of that, but if I spontaneously wake up, I watch the sunrise.
I like both, and it is often recommended to watch them for a better
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circadian rhythm.
I suspect this was just a little oversight, but your second clause needed a subject for that verb.
Of course I won't get up early because of that, but if I spontaneously wake up, I watch the sunrise.
Your sentence is technically correct. Just a stylistic note, I think in a natural/normal conversation I'd say "Of course I won't get up early just to watch the sunrise, but if I spontaneously wake up, I do watch it."
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Your English seems very strong and you express yourself clearly. Great work!
yesterday
Thank you! :)
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Let's Shine! |
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Generally, I prefer sunrise because I think the best way to start the day is to watch the sunrise. |
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I like both, and often recommended to watch them for a better circadian rhythm. I like both, and it is often recommended to watch them for a better I suspect this was just a little oversight, but your second clause needed a subject for that verb. |
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Maybe it's true, maybe not, but I like to see them if I actually can. |
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Of course I won't get up early because of that, but if I spontaneously wake up, I watch the sunrise. Of course I won't get up early because of that, but if I spontaneously wake up, I watch the sunrise. Your sentence is technically correct. Just a stylistic note, I think in a natural/normal conversation I'd say "Of course I won't get up early just to watch the sunrise, but if I spontaneously wake up, I do watch it." |
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