April 3, 2022
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What, most often, makes your entire day better?
In my opinion， it is the habits you built every day.
I used to read the book《Atomic Habit》, this book shows the basic functions behind our behavior in our daily life. The author divides it into three parts about how to build better habits to make yourself better.
1. Identity
2. Process
3. Outcomes
Most of us like to set many goals at the stuff of our life. Then why there are some people who achieve their goals. The key is they stop setting goals and start to think of who they are, what person they want to be? The common saying is we say “ we want to make more money.” The different saying is we say “we are the people who are learning how to make more money and will be rich in the future. That’s “Identity”. You will be more motivated if you have a great mindset. And you will have more and more good habits, also you will start stacking these habits.
If you want to be better, read the book please, and start cultivating good habits for yourself.
As you see, I am learning English, that’s why you can see these words because I am writing English essays every day to make my English writing better.
Go for it if you want to be the nice one you always think of.
You can do it!
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In my opinion， it is the habits you builtd every day.
built- past tense
I used to read the book《Atomic Habit》, twhis book showsch gives us an insight into (better) the basic functions behind our behavior in our daily life.
Most of us like to set many goals at the stuff(?) of our life.
not sure what you mean here
Then why there are some people who achieve their goals.
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The key is they stop setting goals and start to think of who they are, what kind of person they want to be?
The common saying is we say “ we want to make more money.” The different saying is we", when instead we should say “wWe are the people who are learning how to make more money and will be rich in the future.
And you will have more and more good habits, also you will start stacking these habits.
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If you want to be better, please read the book please, and start cultivating good habits for yourself.
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Let‘s have a look！ |
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What, most often, makes your entire day better? |
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In my opinion， it is the habits you built every day. In my opinion， it is the habits you buil built- past tense |
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I used to read the book《Atomic Habit》, this book shows the basic functions behind our behavior in our daily life. I used to read the book《Atomic Habit》, |
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The author divides it into three parts about how to build better habits to make yourself better. |
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1. Identity |
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2. Process |
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3. Outcomes |
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Most of us like to set many goals at the stuff of our life. Most of us like to set many goals at the stuff(?) of our life. not sure what you mean here |
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Then why there are some people who achieve their goals. Then why there are some people who achieve their goals. (?) |
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The key is they stop setting goals and start to think of who they are, what person they want to be? The key is they stop setting goals and start to think of who they are, what kind of person they want to be? |
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The common saying is we say “ we want to make more money.” The different saying is we say “we are the people who are learning how to make more money and will be rich in the future. The common saying is |
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That’s “Identity”. |
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You will be more motivated if you have a great mindset. |
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And you will have more and more good habits, also you will start stacking these habits. And you will have more and more good habits, also you will start stacking these habits. ? |
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If you want to be better, read the book please, and start cultivating good habits for yourself. If you want to be better, please read the book |
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As you see, I am learning English, that’s why you can see these words because I am writing English essays every day to make my English writing better. |
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Go for it if you want to be the nice one you always think of. |
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You can do it! |
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