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alexwong2164

Feb. 6, 2022

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Let’s fight! Won with Style

Let’s fight! Won with Style

Yesterday I was telling you not to go our auguring.

Instead save your breath and focus your dream.

Agree? Disagree?

But last night I watched a video a young Chinese argue with an old western man.

This young Chinese speak with native English plus he really did his homework.

No matter what ever that old western bring any topics.

He can provide a solid data to his that his argument was inaccurate.

Excellent to watch, a lot of good information to learn…

So, we should fight for whatever we believe and speak out loud, not to keep quiet.

But, don’t use dirty tricks or sucker punch…

You need to won beautiful.

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Let’s fight! Woin with Style

Let’s fight!

Woin with Sstyle.

Only need to capitalise the S in the title.

Yesterday I was telling you not to go ourt aurguring.

Or maybe "not to go around a arguing"

Instead save your breath and focus your dream.

ADo you agree?

Disagree?

But last night I watched a video of a young Chinese person argue with an old western man.

You could also say "guy" or "girl" or whatever.

This young Chinese person speaks with native level English plus he really did his homework.

No matter what evertopic that old western bring any topics.man brought up,

(connect this to the next sentence)

Hhe canould provide a solid data to hisprove that that his argument was inaccurate.

Excellent to watch, a lot of good information to learn…

So, we should fight for whatever we believe in and speak out loud, not to keep quiet.

But, don’t use dirty tricks or sucker punch…

You need to woin beautifully.

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Intersting topic, thanks for sharing your thoughts. I value a well put together argument too. I think a good argument leaves no one angry and everyone better informed, but that's not always possible.

Let’s fight! Won with Style

Let’s fight!

Won with Style

Yesterday I was telling you not to go ourt aurguring.

I, but to instead save your breath and focus on your dreams.

This is a dependent clause that should be connected to the previous sentence.

Agree?

DAgree or disagree?

This sounds more natural. Delete the previous "Agree?"

But last night I watched a video where a young Chinese man argued with an old wWestern man.

Capitalize "Western" if you're referring to US/England/Europe etc. Chinese as a nationality is used as an adjective like Western.

This young Chinese speak with native Englishman spoke English natively, plus he really did his homework.

N, no matter what ever that old western bring any topics.the other man brought up.

This is a dependent clause that should be connected to the previous sentence.

He canould provide a solid data to his that hidata that the other man's argument was inaccurate.

"Data" doesn't use "a" and is always seen as plural. This needs to be in the past tense.

EIt was excellent to watch, with a lot of good information to learn.

This is a fragment sentence.

So, we should fight for whatever we believe in and speak out loud, not to keep quiet.

But, we shouldon’t use dirty tricks or sucker punches.

You need to woin beautifulin a respectful manner.

"Beautiful" doesn't really fit here.

Feedback

Good job! Just a reminder to keep the tense the same throughout the passage.

Let’s fight! Won with Style


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Let’s fight! Woin with Style

Let’s fight!


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Won with Style


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Woin with Sstyle.

Only need to capitalise the S in the title.

Yesterday I was telling you not to go our auguring.


Yesterday I was telling you not to go ourt aurguring.

Yesterday I was telling you not to go ourt aurguring.

Or maybe "not to go around a arguing"

Instead save your breath and focus your dream.


I, but to instead save your breath and focus on your dreams.

This is a dependent clause that should be connected to the previous sentence.

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Agree?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ADo you agree?

Disagree?


DAgree or disagree?

This sounds more natural. Delete the previous "Agree?"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But last night I watched a video a young Chinese argue with an old western man.


But last night I watched a video where a young Chinese man argued with an old wWestern man.

Capitalize "Western" if you're referring to US/England/Europe etc. Chinese as a nationality is used as an adjective like Western.

But last night I watched a video of a young Chinese person argue with an old western man.

You could also say "guy" or "girl" or whatever.

This young Chinese speak with native English plus he really did his homework.


This young Chinese speak with native Englishman spoke English natively, plus he really did his homework.

This young Chinese person speaks with native level English plus he really did his homework.

No matter what ever that old western bring any topics.


N, no matter what ever that old western bring any topics.the other man brought up.

This is a dependent clause that should be connected to the previous sentence.

No matter what evertopic that old western bring any topics.man brought up,

(connect this to the next sentence)

He can provide a solid data to his that his argument was inaccurate.


He canould provide a solid data to his that hidata that the other man's argument was inaccurate.

"Data" doesn't use "a" and is always seen as plural. This needs to be in the past tense.

Hhe canould provide a solid data to hisprove that that his argument was inaccurate.

Excellent to watch, a lot of good information to learn…


EIt was excellent to watch, with a lot of good information to learn.

This is a fragment sentence.

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So, we should fight for whatever we believe and speak out loud, not to keep quiet.


So, we should fight for whatever we believe in and speak out loud, not to keep quiet.

So, we should fight for whatever we believe in and speak out loud, not to keep quiet.

But, don’t use dirty tricks or sucker punch…


But, we shouldon’t use dirty tricks or sucker punches.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need to won beautiful.


You need to woin beautifulin a respectful manner.

"Beautiful" doesn't really fit here.

You need to woin beautifully.

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