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Jan. 3, 2021

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Over the past five decades business managing has changed dramatically and continues to evolve at a really fast pace. Market is also less predicable than ever before, which makes managing even more important today.

Unfortunately, business owners frequently confuse business management with self-help. Speakers as Tony Robbins feels capable to teach business management and strategy in a weekend course. Such an approach alienates business owners, who feels confused and closed mind to more professional management strategies.

¿How to teach common sense? ¿How to convince business owners that isn’t true that there’s always a way? It isn’t easy at all but let us be clear that reading “The secret” is the opposite of analytical reasoning and the worse way to run your business

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Let us be clear

Over the past five decades, business managingement has changed dramatically and continues to evolve at a really fast pacerapidly.

MarketThe current economy is also less predicable than ever before, which makes managingement even more important today.

I am assuming by 'market' you meant the economy. The 'market' is usually short for the publicly traded equities (stock) market.

Speakers such as Tony Robbins feels capable tof teaching business management and strategy in a weekend course.

Such an approach alienates business owners, who feels confused and closed -minded toward more professional management strategies.

Not sure what you're trying to say here - seems contradictory.
I would guess you're trying to say:
"Such an approach attracts business owners who feel confused and closed-minded toward more professional management strategies."

¿How todo you teach common sense?

¿How tdo you convince business owners that it isn’t true that 'there’s always a way'?

I'm assuming you're implying that the statement 'there's always a way' is false and that's what you're trying to say.

It isn’'s not easy at allto accept but let us be clear that simply reading “The sSecret” is the opposite of analytical reasoning and the worset way to run your business.

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Well done. Overall, I believe your position is clear.

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Over the past five decades business managing has changed dramatically and continues to evolve at a really fast pace.


Over the past five decades, business managingement has changed dramatically and continues to evolve at a really fast pacerapidly.

Market is also less predicable than ever before, which makes managing even more important today.


MarketThe current economy is also less predicable than ever before, which makes managingement even more important today.

I am assuming by 'market' you meant the economy. The 'market' is usually short for the publicly traded equities (stock) market.

Unfortunately, business owners frequently confuse business management with self-help.


Speakers as Tony Robbins feels capable to teach business management and strategy in a weekend course.


Speakers such as Tony Robbins feels capable tof teaching business management and strategy in a weekend course.

Such an approach alienates business owners, who feels confused and closed mind to more professional management strategies.


Such an approach alienates business owners, who feels confused and closed -minded toward more professional management strategies.

Not sure what you're trying to say here - seems contradictory. I would guess you're trying to say: "Such an approach attracts business owners who feel confused and closed-minded toward more professional management strategies."

¿How to teach common sense?


¿How todo you teach common sense?

¿How to convince business owners that isn’t true that there’s always a way?


¿How tdo you convince business owners that it isn’t true that 'there’s always a way'?

I'm assuming you're implying that the statement 'there's always a way' is false and that's what you're trying to say.

It isn’t easy at all but let us be clear that reading “The secret” is the opposite of analytical reasoning and the worse way to run your business


It isn’'s not easy at allto accept but let us be clear that simply reading “The sSecret” is the opposite of analytical reasoning and the worset way to run your business.

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