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Feb. 19, 2021

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Lesson(s) 59,61,63

Lesson 59 Is that all?

A lady bought some things Then a shop assistant asked her if she wanted to buy a small box of chalk. She said no and The shop assistant said if that all. She said yes and ponied The shop assistant asked what else she wanted. She answered her change.
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Did she buy the chalk?
NO.
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Lesson 61 A bad cold

Mrs. Williams told her husband That their son Jimmy was ill. The doctor came Jimmy's house to check his body. The doctor told Jimmy's panel that Jimmy needed rest for a week. The parents thought Jimmy will be happy.
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What is The matter with Jimmy?
He had got a bad cold.

Is This a good news for Jimmy?
Yes, he didn't like school.
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Lesson 63 Thank you, doctor

The doctor came Jimmy's house to see Jimmy. The doctor said Jimmy was better and he mustn't eat rich food. The doctor asked Mrs. Williams where Mr. Williams was. She sadly said he was in bed because he had got a bad cold too.
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Who else was in bed? Why?
Mr. Williams. Because he had got a bad cold.

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Lesson(s) 59,61,63

Lesson 59 Is that all?

A lady bought some things Tand then a shop assistant asked her if she wanted to buy a small box of chalk.

She said no and Tthe shop assistant saiasked if that allwas all that she wanted.

She said yes and poniedaid. The shop assistant asked her what else she wanted.

She answered that she wanted her change.

Did she buy the chalk?

NO.

Lesson 61 A bad cold

Mrs. Williams told her husband Tthat their son Jimmy was ill.

The doctor came to Jimmy's house to check his body.

The doctor told Jimmy's panelrents that Jimmy needed to rest for a week.

The parents thought Jimmy willould be happy.

What is Tthe matter with Jimmy?

He had got a bad cold.

Is Tthis a good news for Jimmy?

Yes, he didn't like school.

Lesson 63 Thank you, doctor

The doctor came to Jimmy's house to see Jimmy.

The doctor said that Jimmy was better, and he mustn't eat calorie-rich foods.

The doctor asked Mrs. Williams where Mr. Williams was.

Who else was in bed?

Why?

Mr. Williams.

Because he had got a bad cold.

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Fixed the misunderstandings, it should be alright now. :)

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husa2000

Feb. 26, 2021

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She said yes and poniedaid. The shop assistant asked her what else she wanted.

sorry, my mistake.
"She said yes and paied."

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husa2000

Feb. 26, 2021

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She answered that she wanted her change.

the change is "coin"....
can you edit it again?

Lesson(s) 59,61,63


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Lesson 59 Is that all?


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A lady bought some things Then a shop assistant asked her if she wanted to buy a small box of chalk.


A lady bought some things Tand then a shop assistant asked her if she wanted to buy a small box of chalk.

She said no and The shop assistant said if that all.


She said no and Tthe shop assistant saiasked if that allwas all that she wanted.

She said yes and ponied The shop assistant asked what else she wanted.


She said yes and poniedaid. The shop assistant asked her what else she wanted.

She answered her change.


She answered that she wanted her change.

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Did she buy the chalk?


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NO.


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Lesson 61 A bad cold


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Mrs. Williams told her husband That their son Jimmy was ill.


Mrs. Williams told her husband Tthat their son Jimmy was ill.

The doctor came Jimmy's house to check his body.


The doctor came to Jimmy's house to check his body.

The doctor told Jimmy's panel that Jimmy needed rest for a week.


The doctor told Jimmy's panelrents that Jimmy needed to rest for a week.

The parents thought Jimmy will be happy.


The parents thought Jimmy willould be happy.

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What is The matter with Jimmy?


What is Tthe matter with Jimmy?

He had got a bad cold.


He had got a bad cold.

Is This a good news for Jimmy?


Is Tthis a good news for Jimmy?

Yes, he didn't like school.


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Lesson 63 Thank you, doctor


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The doctor came Jimmy's house to see Jimmy.


The doctor came to Jimmy's house to see Jimmy.

The doctor said Jimmy was better and he mustn't eat rich food.


The doctor said that Jimmy was better, and he mustn't eat calorie-rich foods.

The doctor asked Mrs. Williams where Mr. Williams was.


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She sadly said he was in bed because he had got a bad cold too.


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Who else was in bed?


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Why?


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Mr. Williams.


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Because he had got a bad cold.


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