Dec. 17, 2025
Lessons
I took an online English lesson this morning. My speaking is getting better. I’m shy so speaking fluent English is still difficult for me. However, this challenge made me happy. Now I’m really enjoying learning English. These lessons changed my way of thinking that I must not make a mistake.
私は今朝、オンライン英会話のレッスンを受けました。私のスピーキングは少しずつ良くなっています。私は恥ずかしがりなので、まだうまく英語を話すことは難しいです。しかしながら、この挑戦は私を楽しくしてくれました。今は本当に英語を学ぶことを楽しんでいます。これらのレッスンはミスをしてはいけないという、私の考え方を変えました。
Lessons
I took an online English lesson this morning.
My speaking is getting better.
I’m shy, so speaking fluent English is still difficult for me.
You can put a comma here because if you split this sentence into two (taking out the transition word "so") each part works as an individual sentence.
e.g. : "I'm shy. Speaking fluent English is still difficult for me."
However, this challenge made me happy.
Now I’m really enjoying learning English.
These lessons changed my way of thinking that I must nocouldn't make a mistakes.
Your sentence isn't wrong!
I chose the word "couldn't" here because it implies a past tense which reflects your past way of thinking, which you don't think anymore (i.e., before you felt like you *couldn't* make mistakes, but now you feel like you *can*). However it does feel slightly more informal than "must not", so it really depends in your writing style!
I also changed "make a mistake" into "make mistakes". Even though this isn't incorrect, I think it's more typical to use the singular ("make a mistake") when discussing a specific incident. For example, if you were talking about a typo, or the mispronunciation of a word.
Feedback
Your English is really good! The only changes I made were to reflect how I think a native speaker might say these things.
I'm also very shy and have difficulty practicing speaking different languages, so I'm really happy to read about you having a good time doing it! Keep going, I believe in you :D
Dec. 18, 2025
Thank you for your feedback! Your kind explanations helped me a lot. I'm going to continue lessons next year too. I hope I get much better next year :)
I took an online English lesson this morning.
The original sentence is correct, but another option is "I had an online English lesson this morning."
My speaking is getting better.
However, this challenge made me happy.
Now I’m really enjoying learning English.
Feedback
I agree with RoombaUnit's corrections.
I'm glad you're enjoying learning English! I also need to get over the feeling of needing to word everything perfectly.
Dec. 18, 2025
Thanks for the feedback. English is beautiful, so I want to learn fast. But I should'nt hurry:)
Lessons
I took an online English lesson this morning.
My speaking is getting better.
I’m shy, so speaking fluent English is still difficult for me.
However, this challenge made me happy.
Now I’m really enjoying learning English.
These lessons changed my old way of thinking that I must not make a mistakes.
1) using "old" here emphasizes that your thinking changed :)
2) "make a mistake" also *works*, but this sounds better!
e.g "don't drive cars on this road" instead of "don't drive a car on this road"
Feedback
Speaking is important! Glad that you're getting more comfortable with it :)
Always be ready to make mistakes, that's how we grow ^^
Dec. 18, 2025
Thank you! I reraly speak English outside of lessons. So, These lessons are very important for me.
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I’m shy so speaking fluent English is still difficult for me. I’m shy, so speaking fluent English is still difficult for me. I’m shy, so speaking fluent English is still difficult for me. You can put a comma here because if you split this sentence into two (taking out the transition word "so") each part works as an individual sentence. e.g. : "I'm shy. Speaking fluent English is still difficult for me." |
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These lessons changed my way of thinking that I must not make a mistake. These lessons changed my old way of thinking that I must not make 1) using "old" here emphasizes that your thinking changed :) 2) "make a mistake" also *works*, but this sounds better! e.g "don't drive cars on this road" instead of "don't drive a car on this road" These lessons changed my way of thinking that I Your sentence isn't wrong! I chose the word "couldn't" here because it implies a past tense which reflects your past way of thinking, which you don't think anymore (i.e., before you felt like you *couldn't* make mistakes, but now you feel like you *can*). However it does feel slightly more informal than "must not", so it really depends in your writing style! I also changed "make a mistake" into "make mistakes". Even though this isn't incorrect, I think it's more typical to use the singular ("make a mistake") when discussing a specific incident. For example, if you were talking about a typo, or the mispronunciation of a word. |
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