Warm-up: Questions

Q1: One impressive experience ofShare one example of a successful business presentation?. ¶

Q2: What do you want to knowlearn in the first presentation of one company?

1.3 Goal of Pre: I am delighted to have the opportunity to give you a brief overview of our company. And lLet’s see what we can do together of our businessaccomplish together.

our business is redundant after we talk about 'together'

2.1 Company introduction: First of all, let me start by telling you some background information about our company. Founded in 2008 , Shein is  one of the fastest-growing online fashion retailers in the world.

We are headquartered in Nanjing and have expanded our business into more than 200 countries.

2.2 Product: Now, let me give you a brief overview of our product line. We offer a wide range of products, including women's clothing, men’s swear, children's clothing, and accessories.

menswear is usually one word

We are committed to providing high-quality products to customers around the world.

this sentence is redundant since we already talked about high-quality products previously.

2.3 Service: In addition to trendy, affordable, and quality fashion products, we also provide an excellent customer experience. Shein’s website offers a user-friendly interface with a smooth checkout process, and we are always available to answer any questions that you may have.

Besides, theOur company also collaborates with influencers from diverse backgrounds and body shapes to create size-inclusive clothing lines to. This lets us provide an inclusive shopping experience.

cutting sentences a little shorter is good, especially during a business presentation.

3.1 Conclusion: In conclusion, Shein is a fashion e-commerce platform that delivers stylish and affordable fashion products to fashion-conscious customers worldwide. And weI believe that Shein is the perfect partner for your business needs.

Where are you located and how many staffs do you have?

staff is irregular - singular and plural

How about theWhat is your annual sales valrevenue?

How many production lines and capacity do you havedo you have, and what is your capacity?

'how many capacity' doesn't work in this case

Do you have a 'XXX' certificate of XXX?

could also be written 'Do you have the following certificates? XXX YYY ZZZ'

Have you exported products to USA/Europe/Japan?

understandable in context, but still good to qualify

How about theWhat is your MOQ and usual lead time?

May I knowIf you are comfortable answering, where are you buying from?

original question is asking whether or not you can know where you are buying from (yes/no)

How aboutWhat has the market situation infor your placeroduct been in recent 2-5 years (201X - 202X)?

'how about' is more colloquial here - okay when talking, even professionally, but in text seems a little casual

Q1: What we’vhave we discussed about in this lesson?

Q2: How do you evaluwould you rate this lesson?

Q3: What do you think of  your learning effect?

not super clear what you mean here - 'How effective did you think this lesson was?` 'How prepared do you feel to give your own professional presentation' or 'Please rate your confidence for giving your own professional presentation (1 - 5)' might be appropriate.