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July 19, 2021

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Less but happy

Many years ago I told myself to improve my Japanese.

I must write a diary every single day and post on this website.

If I didn’t post because the laziness I will feel guilty.

So, I told myself just writing something, all I need is quantity not quality.

At the end, I did keep this promise at least until now.

But recently I did write less than before.

That is not because the laziness.

That is because I am able to find a new way to improve my Japanese.

So, now I did write less but at the same I did “talk more”, “interactive more”.

Now even I am writing less but I feel a lot more happier.

Corrections

Many years ago I told myselfsaid I was going to improve my Japanese.

"I told myself to" is a very uncommon way of phrasing this kind of sentence.

I musthad to write a diary every single day and post it on this website.

If I didn’t post because theof laziness I willould feel guilty.

So, I told myself to just writing something, all I need ied was quantity not quality.

AtIn the end, I did keep this promise, at least until now.

But recently I didhave been writeing less than before.

That is nNot because of the laziness.

That isBut because I amhave been able to find a new way to improve my Japanese.

So, now I dido write less, but at the same I did “talk more”, and “interactive more”.

Now, even though I am writing less but, I feel a lot more happier.

Avoid using "more + [adjective]-er" expressions. They're unnatural English.

"More happy" or "happier" are acceptable, "more happier" is not.

Less but happy


Many years ago I told myself to improve my Japanese.


Many years ago I told myselfsaid I was going to improve my Japanese.

"I told myself to" is a very uncommon way of phrasing this kind of sentence.

I must write a diary every single day and post on this website.


I musthad to write a diary every single day and post it on this website.

If I didn’t post because the laziness I will feel guilty.


If I didn’t post because theof laziness I willould feel guilty.

So, I told myself just writing something, all I need is quantity not quality.


So, I told myself to just writing something, all I need ied was quantity not quality.

At the end, I did keep this promise at least until now.


AtIn the end, I did keep this promise, at least until now.

But recently I did write less than before.


But recently I didhave been writeing less than before.

That is not because the laziness.


That is nNot because of the laziness.

That is because I am able to find a new way to improve my Japanese.


That isBut because I amhave been able to find a new way to improve my Japanese.

So, now I did write less but at the same I did “talk more”, “interactive more”.


So, now I dido write less, but at the same I did “talk more”, and “interactive more”.

Now even I am writing less but I feel a lot more happier.


Now, even though I am writing less but, I feel a lot more happier.

Avoid using "more + [adjective]-er" expressions. They're unnatural English. "More happy" or "happier" are acceptable, "more happier" is not.

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