Feb. 21, 2023
I used to learn world history by reading books. Nowadays, youtube channels become my main resource. I appreciate that books are more reliable than videos that I don't know who made. However, the history channels is full of attractive contents so that viewers won't get bored. Most people want to know interesting episodes or grasp big picture of history rather than know the exact figures and names. It doesn't matter who was the leader of the rebellion or when it happened.
I come to realize that books are not always true because it is hard to keep up with the latest research and exclude authors' viewpoint. Regarding that point, youtube channels provide objective opinions in the comment by which we can determine if the information is reliable or not.
Learning World History on Youtube
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Regarding that point, youtube channels provide objective opinions in the comments by which we can determine ifwhether the information is reliable or not.
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上手に書けています!歴史を学ぶために、次男もyoutubeの歴史のチャンネルを見ています。
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