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nikogp

Dec. 12, 2021

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Learning strategy

In business strategy everything turns around selfknowledge. The goal is leading a firm that fits your own style.

The problem is that usually we try to copy great leaders that has nothing to be with us. I can read tons of books about Steve Jobs but I will never manage my firm with the same style, worst, my failure will be bigger.

There's the question:

Is it better read all those books about great leaders but look around for someone who inspires you or get inspired by books but learn from your environment, from real people.

I have my own answer, what's yours?

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Learning strategyies

In business strategy everything turns around selfknowledge.When it comes to business strategy, it's all about self-awareness. (?)

No estoy seguro de lo que trataste de decir con "self-knowledge".
"When it comes to" = "Cuando se trata de", es una expresión muy utilizada en tales contextos

The goal is leading a firm that fits your own style.

The problem is that usually we try to copy great leaders thatwho hasve nothing to bein common with us.

Para una cláusula relativa en relación con una persona o (a veces) con un animal, "who" se usa

I can read tons of books about Steve Jobs, but I will never manage my firm with the same style, worst,way, I may failure will be bigger quite badly.

"bigger" es la forma comparativa, pero aquí no haces ninguna comparación con una otra "failure" que fue mencionada antes.

The re's theal question is:

Lo que escribiste no está mal, pero éste és un poco más natural

Is it better to read all those books about great leaders but, look around for someone who inspires you or, and get inspired by books but, or learn from your environment, from real people.?

No comprendo por qué utilizaste "but" aquí. Puedes explicarlo?

I have my own answer, what's yours?

¡Maravillosa frase final!

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Muy bien escrito! Sóla había un poco errores de expresión, pero la tema era ambicioso y impresionante.

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Faizyrooma4

Dec. 12, 2021

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(Lo siento si mi español es una basura, no he escrito en español hasta mucho tiempo ;w;

Learning strategy


Learning strategyies

In business strategy everything turns around selfknowledge.


In business strategy everything turns around selfknowledge.When it comes to business strategy, it's all about self-awareness. (?)

No estoy seguro de lo que trataste de decir con "self-knowledge". "When it comes to" = "Cuando se trata de", es una expresión muy utilizada en tales contextos

The goal is leading a firm that fits your own style.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The problem is that usually we try to copy great leaders that has nothing to be with us.


The problem is that usually we try to copy great leaders thatwho hasve nothing to bein common with us.

Para una cláusula relativa en relación con una persona o (a veces) con un animal, "who" se usa

I can read tons of books about Steve Jobs but I will never manage my firm with the same style, worst, my failure will be bigger.


I can read tons of books about Steve Jobs, but I will never manage my firm with the same style, worst,way, I may failure will be bigger quite badly.

"bigger" es la forma comparativa, pero aquí no haces ninguna comparación con una otra "failure" que fue mencionada antes.

There's the question:


The re's theal question is:

Lo que escribiste no está mal, pero éste és un poco más natural

Is it better read all those books about great leaders but look around for someone who inspires you or get inspired by books but learn from your environment, from real people.


Is it better to read all those books about great leaders but, look around for someone who inspires you or, and get inspired by books but, or learn from your environment, from real people.?

No comprendo por qué utilizaste "but" aquí. Puedes explicarlo?

I have my own answer, what's yours?


I have my own answer, what's yours?

¡Maravillosa frase final!

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