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SummerTeaWater

March 25, 2022

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Learning New Things

While I read a book today, I found a nice sentence.

"If you study more, the resolution of seeing the world increases."

The depth of the trip changes how much I study there.

Even if I go to the same place, what I experience is different when I go to places I don't know and when I go there with a lot of research.

It seems like I am watching TV shows between FHD resolution and 4K UHD resolution.

For understanding this world more clearly, I will keep learning new things.

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Learning New Things

While I reading a book today, I found a nice sentence.

"If you study more, theyour resolution of seeing the world increases.

"

The depth of thea trip changes how much I study there.

Even if I go to the same place, what I experience is different when I go to places I don't know and when I go there with a lot of research.

Not sure how to correct this one but it doesn't sound natural

It seem's like I amthe difference between watching TV shows betweein FHD resolution andcompared to 4K UHD resolution.

ForTo understanding thise world more clearly, I will keep learning new things.

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Good writing! :)

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SummerTeaWater

March 26, 2022

402

Thank you so much. :)

Learning New Things

While I was reading a book today, I found a nice sentence.

"If you study more, theThe more you learn, the more your resolution of seeing the world increases.

"

The depth of the trip changes how much I study thereHow much I've learned, changes the depth of my travels (around the world).

Even if I go to the same place, what I experience iswill be different when I go to places I don't know and when I go there with a lot of research.

I am not too sure what you mean in the second part, so I removed it. Feel free to ask me about it more, though!

It seem's like I amthe difference between watching TV shows betweein FHD resolution andversus 4K UHD resolution.

ForSo, to understanding thise world more clearly, I will keep learning new things.

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I completely agree; I couldn't live without continuing to learn!

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SummerTeaWater

March 26, 2022

402

Thank you very much. :)

Learning New Things


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While I read a book today, I found a nice sentence.


While I was reading a book today, I found a nice sentence.

While I reading a book today, I found a nice sentence.

"If you study more, the resolution of seeing the world increases.


"If you study more, theThe more you learn, the more your resolution of seeing the world increases.

"If you study more, theyour resolution of seeing the world increases.

"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The depth of the trip changes how much I study there.


The depth of the trip changes how much I study thereHow much I've learned, changes the depth of my travels (around the world).

The depth of thea trip changes how much I study there.

Even if I go to the same place, what I experience is different when I go to places I don't know and when I go there with a lot of research.


Even if I go to the same place, what I experience iswill be different when I go to places I don't know and when I go there with a lot of research.

I am not too sure what you mean in the second part, so I removed it. Feel free to ask me about it more, though!

Even if I go to the same place, what I experience is different when I go to places I don't know and when I go there with a lot of research.

Not sure how to correct this one but it doesn't sound natural

It seems like I am watching TV shows between FHD resolution and 4K UHD resolution.


It seem's like I amthe difference between watching TV shows betweein FHD resolution andversus 4K UHD resolution.

It seem's like I amthe difference between watching TV shows betweein FHD resolution andcompared to 4K UHD resolution.

For understanding this world more clearly, I will keep learning new things.


ForSo, to understanding thise world more clearly, I will keep learning new things.

ForTo understanding thise world more clearly, I will keep learning new things.

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