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BlackGlasses

Feb. 9, 2023

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Learning Forum 5

1.-Why did you start to like video games?
When I was a child, I used to get bored and video games provided me challenges that made me feel happy.

2.-Have video games helped you so much in your life?

At first, video games did not help me. They instead made me feel worse. Actually, I use them to be a better person, to improve my mental health and to learn languages.

3.-Why do you think you will learn the benefits of a video game?
When I was reading the textbook called "Reality is Broken" I discovered the benefits of games and it inspired me to make a good use of them and to learn more about games later.

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Learning Forum 5

1.- Why did you start to likeliking video games?
When I was a child, I used to get bored and video games provided me challenges that made me feel happy.

2.- Have video games helped you so much inwith your life?

At first, video games did not help me.

They instead made me feel worse.

Actually, I use them now to be a better person, to improve my mental health and to learn languages.

すごいですね。

3.- Why do you think you will learn the benefits ofrom a video game?

When I was reading the textbook called "Reality is Broken" I discovered the benefits of games and it inspired me to make a good use of them and to learn more about games later.

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面白い面接です。上手に書けています!

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BlackGlasses

Feb. 12, 2023

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ありがとうございます o(^▽^)o 嬉しい。

Learning Forum 5

1.- Whyat drew you to video games? / Why were you interested in video games as a child? / When did you start to likeliking video games? and why? ¶
When I was a child, I used to get bored and video games provided me challenges that made me feel happy.

2.- Have video games helped you so much in yourfar in life?

At first, video games did not help me.

They instead made me feel worse.

Actually, I use them to be a better person, to improve my mental health and to learn languages.

3.- Why do you think you will learn the benefits of a video game?

I don’t understand this, please more context !

When I was reading the textbook called "Reality is Broken" I discovered the benefits of games and it inspired me to make a good use of them and to learn more about games laterthem.

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Nice ⚽️

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BlackGlasses

Feb. 12, 2023

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Thank you very much for taking the time to correct a lot of my journals. I owe you one.

Learning Forum 5

1.-Why did you start to likeliking video games?
When I was a child, I used to get bored and video games provided me challenges that made me feel happy.

2.-Have video games helped you so much in your life?

At first, video games did not help me.

They instead made me feel worse.

3.-Why doid you think you will learn ththere were benefits tof a video games?

When I was reading the textbook called "Reality is Broken" I discovered the benefits of games and it inspired me to make a good use of them and to learn more about games later.

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Good job

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BlackGlasses

Feb. 12, 2023

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Thank you so much! Have a nice day. ☺️

Learning Forum 5


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1.-Why did you start to like video games? When I was a child, I used to get bored and video games provided me challenges that made me feel happy.


1.-Why did you start to likeliking video games?
When I was a child, I used to get bored and video games provided me challenges that made me feel happy.

1.- Whyat drew you to video games? / Why were you interested in video games as a child? / When did you start to likeliking video games? and why? ¶
When I was a child, I used to get bored and video games provided me challenges that made me feel happy.

1.- Why did you start to likeliking video games?
When I was a child, I used to get bored and video games provided me challenges that made me feel happy.

2.-Have video games helped you so much in your life?


2.-Have video games helped you so much in your life?

2.- Have video games helped you so much in yourfar in life?

2.- Have video games helped you so much inwith your life?

At first, video games did not help me.


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They instead made me feel worse.


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Actually, I use them to be a better person, to improve my mental health and to learn languages.


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Actually, I use them now to be a better person, to improve my mental health and to learn languages.

すごいですね。

3.-Why do you think you will learn the benefits of a video game?


3.-Why doid you think you will learn ththere were benefits tof a video games?

3.- Why do you think you will learn the benefits of a video game?

I don’t understand this, please more context !

3.- Why do you think you will learn the benefits ofrom a video game?

When I was reading the textbook called "Reality is Broken" I discovered the benefits of games and it inspired me to make a good use of them and to learn more about games later.


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When I was reading the textbook called "Reality is Broken" I discovered the benefits of games and it inspired me to make a good use of them and to learn more about games laterthem.

When I was reading the textbook called "Reality is Broken" I discovered the benefits of games and it inspired me to make a good use of them and to learn more about games later.

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