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BlackGlasses

Feb. 7, 2023

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Greetings, Natalia.

I have some questions for you.

Why were you afraid of dolls?

Why do you like horror movies now?

What did you do to lose the fear of dolls?

Goodbye

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Greetings, Natalia.

I have some questions for you.

Why were you afraid of dolls?

Why do you like horror movies now?

What did you do to lose theyour fear of dolls?

“What did you do to get over your fear of flying?”

Goodbye

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Nice !

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BlackGlasses

Feb. 9, 2023

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Thank you so much!

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Greetings, Natalia.

I have some questions for you.

Why were you afraid of dolls?

Why do you like horror movies now?

What did you do to lose theget over your fear of dolls?

This is how we say it in the US.

Goodbye.

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よく出来ました!

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BlackGlasses

Feb. 9, 2023

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Thank you so much!

What did you do to lose theovercome your fear of dolls?

The other correction you got is also good, but an alternative way to phrase this is with the word "overcome".

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BlackGlasses

Feb. 9, 2023

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Thank you so much!

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Greetood morning/afternoon/evenings, Natalia.

“Greetings” definitely works but sounds very formal and almost robotic. Something like “Good evening” for example is both formal and commonly used.

I have some questions for you.

Why were you afraid of dolls?

Why do you like horror movies now?

What did you do to lose theyour fear of dolls?

I think “the fear” works but “your fear” might sound a bit more natural.

Goodbye

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Good work

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BlackGlasses

Feb. 9, 2023

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Thank you for taking the time to correct me.

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Greetings, Natalia.


Greetood morning/afternoon/evenings, Natalia.

“Greetings” definitely works but sounds very formal and almost robotic. Something like “Good evening” for example is both formal and commonly used.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have some questions for you.


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Why were you afraid of dolls?


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Why do you like horror movies now?


Why do you like horror movies now?

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What did you do to lose the fear of dolls?


What did you do to lose theyour fear of dolls?

I think “the fear” works but “your fear” might sound a bit more natural.

What did you do to lose theovercome your fear of dolls?

The other correction you got is also good, but an alternative way to phrase this is with the word "overcome".

What did you do to lose theget over your fear of dolls?

This is how we say it in the US.

What did you do to lose theyour fear of dolls?

“What did you do to get over your fear of flying?”

Goodbye


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Goodbye.

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