Dec. 16, 2022
Learning Forum 2
Hello! I hope you're having a nice day.
For today's journal entry I'll be attempting to a homework task. In this homework task I need to describe my peer.
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular. I wish to write in a formal style.
This is my fourth participation in this forum.
Greetings.
Fidel, my peer is 17 years old. He is from Mexico City and he has never traveled to another country.
His favorite song is "If I can dream" by Elvis Presley.
During his weekends, he plays videogames or goes to parties.
He is not used to read books and he do not know how to play an instrument, however, he sings fairly well.
Goodbye.
Learning Forum 2
I hope you're having a nice day.
For today's journal entry I'll be attempting to a homework task.
or you can say "attempting to do" to sound more natural.
In this homework tasksignment I need to describe my peer.
task or homework assignment
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular.
I wish to write in a formal style.
This is my fourth time participationg in this forum.
Fidel, my peer, is 17 years old.
He is from Mexico City and he has never traveled to another country.
His favorite song is "If I can dream" by Elvis Presley.
During hisOn the weekends, he plays videogames or goes to parties.
He is not used to read books and he do not know how to play an instrument, however, he sings fairly well.
Can I have a translation for the first part before "and"?
Goodbye.
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Great job! Your writing is very easy to understand
Dec. 19, 2022
Thank you so much!
Dec. 19, 2022
He is not used to read books and he do not know how to play an instrument, however, he sings fairly well.
Él no suele leer libros /he is not used to reading books. Haha I forgot to conjugate in gerund.
Dec. 20, 2022
Él no suele leer libros /he is not used to reading books. Haha I forgot to conjugate in gerund.
Thank you! In that case, I'd say "he doesn't usually read books and doesn't know how an instrument. However, he sings fairly well.
Dec. 21, 2022
Thank you! In that case, I'd say "he doesn't usually read books and doesn't know how an instrument. However, he sings fairly well.
Ok. Thanks again for helping me to sound more natural.
Dec. 22, 2022
No problem!
Learning Forum 2
Hello!
I hope you're having a nice day.
For today's journal entry I'll be attempting to complete a homework task.
In this homework task, I need to describe my peer.
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular.
I wish to write in a formal style.
This is my fourth time participationg in this forum.
Greetings.
Fidel, my peer, is 17 years old.
He is from Mexico City and he has never traveled to another country.
His favorite song is "If I cCan dDream" by Elvis Presley.
During his weekends, he plays videogames or goes to parties.
This is correct, but to make it sound more natural you could say:
During his weekends, he enjoys plays video games and going to parties.
He is not used to reading books and he does not know how to play an instrument, however. Despite this, he sings fairly well.
Goodbye.
Dec. 17, 2022
Thank you so much!
Learning Forum 2
Hello!
I hope you're having a nice day.
For today's journal entry I'll be attempting to do a homework tasksignment.
Clarify what your "attemping to", using assignment instead of task makes it sound less harsh and more pleasing to the ear.
In this homework tasksignment I need to describe my peer.
You can use 'task' and grammatically it is still correct but 'assignment sounds better.
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular.
I wish to write in a formal style.
This is my fourth participationassignment in this forum.
We as English speakers don't usually use 'participation' when talking about writing activities, 'participation' is typically used when talking about being involved in some sort of sporting event.
Greetings.
Fidel, my peer, is 17 years old.
He is from Mexico City and he has never travelled to another country.
His favorite song is "If I can dream" by Elvis Presley.
During his weekends, he plays videogames or goes to parties.
He is not used to reading books and he do noesn't know how to play an instrument, however, he sings fairly well.
Goodbye.
Feedback
Your sentences are excellent. Like Spanish, we have different endings for different situations. Learning when to use what takes lots of practice. I have no doubt that you will learn this quickly.
Dec. 17, 2022
Tim, I'm really grateful for all your help and corrections. Thank you!
Dec. 17, 2022
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Learning Forum 2
Hello!
I hope you're having a nice day.
For today's journal entry I'll be attempting to a homework task.
In this (homework) task I need to describe my peer.
You needn’t repeat “homework”—we already know it from the previous sentence.
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular.
I wish to write in a formal style.
This is mythe fourth time I am participationg in this forum.
Greetings.
Fidel, my peer, is 17 years old.
He is from Mexico City and he has never traveled to another country.
His favorite song is "If I cCan dDream" by Elvis Presley.
During (his) weekends, he plays videogames or goes to parties.
He is not used to reading books and he does not know how to play an instrument, however, he sings fairly well.
Goodbye.
Feedback
Well done.
Dec. 17, 2022
Thank you so much!
For today's journal entry I'll be attempting ta homework task. OR "I'll be attempting to do a homework task."
He idoes not used toread books (OR "He doesn't like reading books") and he does not know how to play an instrument, however, he sings fairly well.
Dec. 17, 2022
Thank you so much!
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