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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 29, 2021

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Learning English

In fact, I am really into learning English these days

Every early morning, I make a study plan one day, and try to make the goal as many as possible.

Shadowing a script, composition, writing down a journal and reading a book in English are things to study.

When my skills are better, I feel more easy to do them.

As a result, I practice more time and I am able to learn more.

I hope I want to speak fluently in English.

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Learning English

In fact, I am really into learning English these days. / These days, I am really into learning English.

Every early every morning, I make a study plan one day, and try to make theas many goals as many as possible.

Shadowing a script, composition, writing down a journal and reading a book in English are things to study.

WhenAs my skills areget better, I feel more easylike it's easier to do them.

As a result, I practice more time, and I am able to learn more.

I hope to speak fluently in English. / I want to speak fluently in English.

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Your hard work is admirable. I'm sure you'll be fluent in English in no time. Great work! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 30, 2021

402

Many thanks :)

In fact, I am really into learning English these days.

Every early morning, I make a study plan onfor the day, and try to make the goal as many as possible.

You could also say "early every morning", to emphasize that you make a study plan EARLY each morning, but not "every early morning" as the word order is not very natural.

Shadowing a script, composition, writing down a journal and reading a book in English are thingactivities to study.

Here "activities" might be a more appropriate word.

When my skills are better, I feel more easy to doconfident using them.

Here it sounds more natural to say "I feel more confident". You could also say "I find it easier to...".

As a result, I practice for more time and I am able to learn more.

here we need "for" to express time (for example: I practice for more time, I practice for 45 minutes, I practice for less time...)

I hope I want to speak fluently in English.

You can say "I hope to speak fluently in English" or "I want to speak fluently in English" - either is fine! But you cannot use both.

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SummerTeaWater

Nov. 30, 2021

402

Thank you so much!

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In fact, I am really into learning English these days


In fact, I am really into learning English these days.

In fact, I am really into learning English these days. / These days, I am really into learning English.

Every early morning, I make a study plan one day, and try to do the goal as many as possible.


Shadowing a script, composition, writing down a journal and reading a book in English are things to study.


Shadowing a script, composition, writing down a journal and reading a book in English are thingactivities to study.

Here "activities" might be a more appropriate word.

Shadowing a script, composition, writing down a journal and reading a book in English are things to study.

When my skills is more better, I feel more easy to do them.


As a result, I practice more time and I am able to learn more.


As a result, I practice for more time and I am able to learn more.

here we need "for" to express time (for example: I practice for more time, I practice for 45 minutes, I practice for less time...)

As a result, I practice more time, and I am able to learn more.

I hope I want to speak more fluently in English.


Every early morning, I make a study plan one day, and try to make the goal as many as possible.


Every early morning, I make a study plan onfor the day, and try to make the goal as many as possible.

You could also say "early every morning", to emphasize that you make a study plan EARLY each morning, but not "every early morning" as the word order is not very natural.

Every early every morning, I make a study plan one day, and try to make theas many goals as many as possible.

When my skills are better, I feel more easy to do them.


When my skills are better, I feel more easy to doconfident using them.

Here it sounds more natural to say "I feel more confident". You could also say "I find it easier to...".

WhenAs my skills areget better, I feel more easylike it's easier to do them.

I hope I want to speak fluently in English.


I hope I want to speak fluently in English.

You can say "I hope to speak fluently in English" or "I want to speak fluently in English" - either is fine! But you cannot use both.

I hope to speak fluently in English. / I want to speak fluently in English.

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