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Aug. 16, 2021

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I recently started studying English again, because I want to work in America in the future. I have a vague longing for America.
I was born in America, but I came to Japan with my family when I was one year old. Because I grew up in Japan and also my parents are Japanese, I don't speak English. Recently I started thinking I wanted to work in the country where I was born.
I went on a trip to America four years ago. I was deeply impressed by the grandness of everything of America. The grand, the architectures, the foods...and so on everything was big. I wanted to know more about American culture.
I'm going to study English hard in order to work in America in the future.

私は最近改めて英語を勉強し始めました。なぜなら将来アメリカで働きたいと思っているからです。私はアメリカに漠然とした憧れを持っています。私はアメリカで生まれました。しかし、一歳の時家族と一緒に日本に来ました。私は日本で育ちましたし、両親は日本人なので私は英語を話せません。最近自分が生まれた国で働きたいと思うようになりました。
4年前にアメリカに旅行に行きました。私はアメリカのすべてのものの壮大さに深く感銘を受けました。土地や建物、食べ物などすべてが大きかったです。私はアメリカの文化についてより知りたいと思いました。
将来アメリカで働くために英語の勉強を頑張るつもりです。

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I recently started studying English again, because I want to work in America in the future.

I was born in America, but I came to Japan with my familymy family moved back to Japan when I was one year old.

Because I grew up in Japan and also my parents are Japanese, I don't speak English.

This and the previous sentence are grammatically correct, but I would rephrase for clarity:
I was born in the US to Japanese parents. We moved back to Japan when I was one years ago, and I grew up in Japan, which is why I don't speak English.

Recently I started thinking I wanted to work in the country where I was born.

I was deeply impressed by the grandness ofhow big everything ofwas in America.

The grand, the architecture (wrong word; not sure what you're trying to say here), the buildings, the food portions...and so on; everything was big.

I'm going to study English hard in order tso that I can go work in America in the future.

Learning English

I recently started studying English again, because I want to work in America in the future.

I recently started studying English again, because I want to work in America in the future.

I have a vague longing for America.

I was born in America, but I came to Japan with my family when I was one year old.

I was born in America, but I came to Japan with my familymy family moved back to Japan when I was one year old.

Because I grew up in Japan and also my parents are Japanese, I don't speak English.

Because I grew up in Japan and also my parents are Japanese, I don't speak English.

This and the previous sentence are grammatically correct, but I would rephrase for clarity: I was born in the US to Japanese parents. We moved back to Japan when I was one years ago, and I grew up in Japan, which is why I don't speak English.

Recently I started thinking I wanted to work in the country where I was born.

Recently I started thinking I wanted to work in the country where I was born.

I went on a trip to America four years ago.

I was deeply impressed by the grandness of everything of America.

I was deeply impressed by the grandness ofhow big everything ofwas in America.

The grand, the architectures, the foods...and so on everything was big.

The grand, the architecture (wrong word; not sure what you're trying to say here), the buildings, the food portions...and so on; everything was big.

I wanted to know more about American culture.

I'm going to study English hard in order to work in America in the future.

I'm going to study English hard in order tso that I can go work in America in the future.

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