Oct. 7, 2025
Learning Cooking
Eating out has become a luxury thing for me in Canada. Most of the time, I have to cook for myself at home. A few months later, I am an expert in the kitchen. One thing I dislike very much is paying tips, which is normal here, but as expenses in this country seem a bit high, the additional service fees could really increase my burden. However, as an individual, I am definitely unable to challenge the tradition. The only way to be confident in the restaurant is to pay tips or not go there. Probably because I have obtained a reputation for cooking, a friend phoned me and asked me to join their family party and help them make hot pot on the coming Thanksgiving Day. To be honest, I don't want to go there, but I answered yes promptly.
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Good job with this one. There are a few sentences that are unnatural and long, but your original writing is understandable!
Oct. 7, 2025
Thank you for your corrections!
Learning Cooking
Eating out has become a luxury thing for me in Canada.
Most of the time, I have to cook for myself at home.
After a few months later, I am now an expert in the kitchen.
Original wasn’t wrong but this sounds more natural to me
One thing I dislike very much is paying tips, which is normal here, but as expenses in this country seem a bit high, the additional service fees could really increase my burdenspending.
The only way to be confident in the restaurant is to pay tips or not go there.
Probably because I have obtained a reputation for cooking, a friend phoned me and asked me to join their family party and help them make hot pot on the comingnext Thanksgiving Day.
To be honest, I don't want to go there, but I answered yes promptly.
I’m assume you don’t want to go at all, the location itself isn’t the problem (so you don’t need “there”)
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Why say yes if you don’t want to go? Just say thanks but I already have plans 😅
Oct. 7, 2025
Thank you!
This year, Thanksgiving Day also his birthday, I don't want him feel tired, even though I've been tired recently.
However, as an individual, I am definitely unable to challenge the tradition.
I feel this sentence flows more naturally without "definitely". It isn't wrong to use it, but sticks out a little
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Overall it reads very naturally, good job
Oct. 7, 2025
Thank you for your corrections.
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One thing I dislike very much is paying tips, which is normal here, but as expenses in this country seem a bit high, the additional service fees could really increase my burden. One thing I dislike very much is paying tips, which is normal here, but as expenses in this country seem a bit high, the additional service fees could really increase my One thing I |
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However, as an individual, I am definitely unable to challenge the tradition. However, as an individual, I am I feel this sentence flows more naturally without "definitely". It isn't wrong to use it, but sticks out a little However, as an individual, I am |
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The only way to be confident in the restaurant is to pay tips or not go there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The only way I'm not sure what you mean, but this is more natural. |
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Probably because I have obtained a reputation for cooking, a friend phoned me and asked me to join their family party and help them make hot pot on the coming Thanksgiving Day. Probably because I have obtained a reputation for cooking, a friend phoned me and asked me to join their family party and help them make hot pot Probably because |
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