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ozymandias99

Nov. 24, 2022

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Learning a whole new subject

Prompt: If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose?

Learning is a neverending process throughout a person's life. Certain individuals want to deep dive in more abstract concepts, whereas some others prefer to improve their knowledge regarding empirical applications. As for myself, I would prefer to plunge into Pure Mathematics.

To begin with, Mathematics has been astonishing minds since the beginning of time. Pythagoras, Euclide and Newton are amongst those who had the pleasure of appreciating Pure Mathematics at its full potential. That said, an excitement for learning was the driving force behind their desire to acquire this knowledge. Should I get to grips with the abstract thinking that it requires, I am sure that I would enjoy the ride.

Not only is Pure Mathematics beautiful but it also provides useful insights in innumerable branches of knowledge. For instance, this subject is constantly used in Engineering when someone is computing the necessary materials for building a car's engine. Moreover, it is heavily implemented when it is desired to create new and efficient software algorithms, which is a deeply rooted problem within the Computer Science field.

Furthermore, in the long run, learning Pure Mathematics will greatly improve the logical reasoning of those who take the time to master it. It is not by chance that some of the greatest minds of all time have fallen in love with this topic. These smart individuals had the opportunity of training their thought process by applying the abstract concepts that this particular subject necessitates.

To conclude, Mathematics is the language of the universe and having the beautiful opportunity of learning it would be highly enjoyable. Moreover, as it has a wide range of applications, getting in touch with it would be a means to an end. Such is the importance of mathematics that it will enhance the countless mental skills that I have long wanted to improve.

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Learning a wWhole nNew sSubject

Prompt: If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose?

Learning is a neverending process throughout a person's life.

Certain individuals want to deep diveive deep into more abstract concepts, whereas some others prefer to improve their knowledge regarding empirical applications.

As for myself, I would prefer to plunge into Pure Mathematics.

To begin with, Mathematics has been astonishing minds since the beginning of time.

Pythagoras, Euclide and Newton are amongst those who had the pleasure of appreciating Pure Mathematics at its full potential.

That said, an excitement for learning was the driving force behind their desire to acquire this knowledge.

Should I get to grips withcomprehend the abstract thinking that it requires, I am sure that I would enjoy the ride.

"Get to grips" is kind of slangy and it took me a moment to understand what you were trying to say.

Not only is Pure Mathematics beautiful but it also provides useful insights into innumerable branches of knowledge.

I agree!

For instance, this subject is constantly used in Engineering when someone is computing the necessary materials for building a car's engine.

Moreover, it is heavily implemented when it is desired to createing new and efficient software algorithms, which is aare deeply rooted problems within the Computer Science field.

Furthermore, in the long run, learning Pure Mathematics will greatly improve the logical reasoning of those who take the time to master it.

It is not by chance that some of the greatest minds of all time have fallen in love with this topic.

These smart individuals had the opportunity of training their thought process by applying the abstract concepts that this particular subject necessitates.

To conclude, Mathematics is the language of the universe and having the beautiful opportunity of learning it would be highly enjoyable.

Moreover, as it has a wide range of applications, getting in touch with it would be a means to an end.

Such is the importance of mathematics that it will enhance the countless mental skills that I have long wanted to improve.

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Very, very well written! Best of luck in your endeavors! I hope you get the chance, too!

Learning a whole new subject


Learning a wWhole nNew sSubject

Prompt: If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Learning is a neverending process throughout a person's life.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Certain individuals want to deep dive in more abstract concepts, whereas some others prefer to improve their knowledge regarding empirical applications.


Certain individuals want to deep diveive deep into more abstract concepts, whereas some others prefer to improve their knowledge regarding empirical applications.

As for myself, I would prefer to plunge into Pure Mathematics.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To begin with, Mathematics has been astonishing minds since the beginning of time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Pythagoras, Euclide and Newton are amongst those who had the pleasure of appreciating Pure Mathematics at its full potential.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That said, an excitement for learning was the driving force behind their desire to acquire this knowledge.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Should I get to grips with the abstract thinking that it requires, I am sure that I would enjoy the ride.


Should I get to grips withcomprehend the abstract thinking that it requires, I am sure that I would enjoy the ride.

"Get to grips" is kind of slangy and it took me a moment to understand what you were trying to say.

Not only is Pure Mathematics beautiful but it also provides useful insights in innumerable branches of knowledge.


Not only is Pure Mathematics beautiful but it also provides useful insights into innumerable branches of knowledge.

I agree!

For instance, this subject is constantly used in Engineering when someone is computing the necessary materials for building a car's engine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Moreover, it is heavily implemented when it is desired to create new and efficient software algorithms, which is a deeply rooted problem within the Computer Science field.


Moreover, it is heavily implemented when it is desired to createing new and efficient software algorithms, which is aare deeply rooted problems within the Computer Science field.

Furthermore, in the long run, learning Pure Mathematics will greatly improve the logical reasoning of those who take the time to master it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is not by chance that some of the greatest minds of all time have fallen in love with this topic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

These smart individuals had the opportunity of training their thought process by applying the abstract concepts that this particular subject necessitates.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To conclude, Mathematics is the language of the universe and having the beautiful opportunity of learning it would be highly enjoyable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Moreover, as it has a wide range of applications, getting in touch with it would be a means to an end.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Such is the importance of mathematics that it will enhance the countless mental skills that I have long wanted to improve.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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