Sept. 28, 2022
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The business school is harder as I thought it gives a many new subjects and new rules. Online groups always with full message and I must all read. My whole classes text the full time and I never know which message is for me. I have afraid of the test the teachers make a many test and homework. When we too loud made we test than lesseon. I found that not fair because we are twenty-eight children. We are too many for so long quiet. Always speak anybody with another child. Until the teachers have enough and we all must punishment is not fair. I could be a many learning but a could this. It is not so bad I make the best of this.
The business school is harder as I thought it gives abecause there are many new subjects and new rules.
you need a preposition after the first part of your sentence (like "because").
Online groups always with full of messages and I must all read them all.
My wholeThe students in my classes text the fullall the time and I never know which message is for me.
Making it clearer by adding "students" because they are the ones that are texting.
I haveam afraid of the test and the teachers make aassign many tests and homework.
In english we say that we are afraid / I am afraid.
When we are too loud we made we test than lesseon.
Ich habe den Satz leider nicht verstanden :(
Meinst du: When we are too loud, the teacher will give us a pop-quiz (Überraschungprüfung oder so)
I found that not fair because we are twenty-eight childrenstudents.
We are too manyThe group is too big to stay quiet for so long quiet.
I rewrote it to be grammatically correct but I get what you mean here.
Always speak anybody with another child.
Was meinst du hier?
Until the teachers have enough and we all must punishmentReceiving a punishment from the teachers is not fair.
I could be a many learning but a could this.
Was meinst du?
It is not so bad I make the best out of this.
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This is really well written and I could understand all of the main ideas you wrote about. Keep it up!!☺️
The bBusiness school is harder asthan I thought it gives a, there are many new subjects and new rules.
Online groups are always with fullfull with messages and I must all read them all.
This sounds more natural: "There are always a lot of messages in the online groups and I have to read them all."
My whole classes texts the fullwhole time and I never know which message iss are for me.
I would say "whole time" instead of "full time", example: "I was working the whole time".
"which message is for me" makes sense, but I would just make it plural to sound more natural.
I haveam afraid of the tests, the teachers make agive many tests and lots of homework.
We say "I am afraid"
It would be correct to say: "The teachers make many tests and lots of homework", but I would say they "give many tests and lots of homework".
When we are too loud made we test than lesseonwe have to take a test.
I'm not sure what you are saying, my correction might not be correct.
I found that not fair because we are twenty-eight children.
We are too many to stay quiet for so long quiet.
Can rephrase: "There are too many of us, it's hard for us to stay quiet for so long"
Always speak anybodyThere is always someone speaking with another child.
UntilEventually the teachers have had enough and we all musget punishment ied, it's not fair.
I think you're saying "once the teachers have had enough we get punished", as in they get frusterated at some point and punish everyone. I hope I understood correctly.
I could be a many learning but a coulda lot instead of having to do this.
It is not so bad, I make the best of ithis.
"I make the best of it" sounds more natural.
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Good work!
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The business school is harder as I thought it gives a many new subjects and new rules.
The business school is harder as I thought you need a preposition after the first part of your sentence (like "because"). |
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Online groups always with full message and I must all read. Online groups are always This sounds more natural: "There are always a lot of messages in the online groups and I have to read them all." Online groups always |
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My whole classes text the full time and I never know which message is for me. My whole class I would say "whole time" instead of "full time", example: "I was working the whole time". "which message is for me" makes sense, but I would just make it plural to sound more natural.
Making it clearer by adding "students" because they are the ones that are texting. |
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I have afraid of the test the teachers make a many test and homework. I We say "I am afraid" It would be correct to say: "The teachers make many tests and lots of homework", but I would say they "give many tests and lots of homework". I In english we say that we are afraid / I am afraid. |
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When we too loud made we test than lesseon. When we are too loud I'm not sure what you are saying, my correction might not be correct. When we are too loud we mad Ich habe den Satz leider nicht verstanden :( Meinst du: When we are too loud, the teacher will give us a pop-quiz (Überraschungprüfung oder so) |
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I found that not fair because we are twenty-eight children. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I found that not fair because we are twenty-eight |
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We are too many for so long quiet. We are too many to stay quiet for so long Can rephrase: "There are too many of us, it's hard for us to stay quiet for so long"
I rewrote it to be grammatically correct but I get what you mean here. |
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Always speak anybody with another child.
Always speak anybody with another child. Was meinst du hier? |
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Until the teachers have enough and we all must punishment is not fair.
I think you're saying "once the teachers have had enough we get punished", as in they get frusterated at some point and punish everyone. I hope I understood correctly.
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I could be a many learning but a could this. I could be I could be a many learning but a could this. Was meinst du? |
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It is not so bad I make the best of this. It is not so bad, I make the best of it "I make the best of it" sounds more natural. It is not so bad I make the best out of this. |
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