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Jack

June 23, 2024

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Learn to Ride Bikes in the Past.

When I was a child, only two or three families in my village had a bike. Families having a bike at that time in the countryside were considered rich.

My family had a bike, but I didn't think my family was rich. My family bought a bike because my father needed it. My father worked for the township government. He rode the bike to work and went back home.

There were not many types of bikes back then. The bikes people had were in almost the same structure. The bike frame consisted of three steel tubes.

When children were in elementary school, most of them started learning to ride bikes. But they were too short to ride bikes.

Since their legs were short, they couldn't reach the pedals if they sat on the seat. So when they learn to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, put their right foot on the right pedal through the space inside the frame.

When children learned to ride, their parents held the rear shelf of the bike so that the children would not fall down before they could control the bike in balance.

However, before the children could really ride bikes, all of them would fall off the bike several times. But they wouldn't get hurt because the ground was soil.

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Learn to Ride Bikes in the Past.

How I learnt to ride a bike

When I was a child, only two or three families in my village had a bike.

Families havowning a bike at that time in the countryside were considered rich.

My family had a bike, but I didn't think my family was rich.

My family bought a bike because my father needed it.

My father worked for the township government.local council.

He rode the bike to work and went back homeback and forth to work.

There were not many types of bikes back then.

The bikes people had were in almost the same structype and had the same features.

The bike frame consisted of three steel tubes.

When children were in elementary school, most of them started learning to ride bikes.

But theyre were too short to riden’t enough bikes.

Since their legs were short, they couldn't reach the pedals if they sat on the seat.

So when they learnt to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, put their right foot on the right pedal through the space inside the frame.

When children learned to ride, their parents held the rear shelf of the bike so that the children would not fall down before they coul. This helped control the bike in balance.

However, before the children could really ride bikes, all of them would fall off the bike several times.

But they wouldn't get hurt because the ground was soil.ft.

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Jack

June 26, 2024

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Thank you very much.

Learn to Ride Bikes in the Past.

When I was a child, only two or three families in my village had a bike.

Families havingwith a bike at that time in the countryside were considered rich.

My family had a bike, but I didn't think my family was rich.

My family bought a bike because my father needed it.

My father worked for the township government.

He rode the bike to work and went back home.

There were not many types of bikes back then.

The bikes people had were in almostmostly had the same structure.

The bike frame consisted of three steel tubes.

When children were in elementary school, most of them started learning to ride bikes.

But they were too short to ride bikes.

Since their legs were short, they couldn't reach the pedals if they sat on the seat.

So when they learned to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, and put their right foot on the right pedal through the space inside the frame.

When children learned to ride, their parents held the rear shelfrack of the bike so that the children would not fall down before they could control the bike in balance.

However, before the children could really ride bikeslearned to ride, all of them would fall off the bike several times.

But they wouldn't get hurt because the ground was soil.

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Jack

June 23, 2024

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Thank you very much.

Learning to Ride Bikes in the Past.

When I was a child, only two or three families in my village had a bike.

Families having a bike at that timAt the time, families who had a bike in the countryside were considered rich.

My family had a bike, but I didn't think my family was rich.

My family bought a bike because my father needed it.

My fatherHe worked for the township government.,

township government OR municipal government

Heand rode the bike to work and went back homeand from work.

There were not many types of bikes back then.

The bikes people had were in almost all of the same structure.,

The bike framewhich consisted of three steel tubes.

"The bike frame consisted of three steel tubes," is correct, but in English we do not like to repeat the topic of a sentence. So, consider connecting the sentences.

When children were in elementary school, most of them started learning to ride bikes.

"...started learning to ride bikes." OR "...started to learn how to ride bikes."

But they were too short to ride the bikes.

Since their legs were short, they couldn't reach the pedals if they sat on the seat.

So when they learned to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, and put their right foot on the right pedal through the space insidebetween the frame.

When children learned to ride, their parents held the rear shelf of the bike so that the childreney would not fall down before they could control the bike inand balance.

However, before the children could really ride bikes, all of them by themselves, they would fall off the bike several times.

But they wouldn't get hurt because the ground they landed on was soil.

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In my childhood, I lived in a town and often rode a bike. But now I live in the city and don't ride bikes because it's dangerous. Remembering when I learned how to ride a bike brings back good memories.

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Jack

June 23, 2024

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Thank you very much. I still ride bikes to and from work now. It’s very safe to ride a bike in my city because every street here has lanes on both sides of the street for bikes and electric bikes. Thank you very much for correcting my post.

Learning to Ride Bikes in the Past.

When I was a child, only two or three families in my village had a bike.

Families havingwho owned a bike at that time in the countryside time were considered rich in the countryside.

My family had a bike, but I didn't think my family was rich.

My family bought a bike because my father needed it.

My father worked for the township government.

He rode the bike to work and went back homeand from work.

There were not many types of bikes back then.

The bikes people had were in almost the same structurestructured similarly.

Or: "The bikes people had had almost the same structure," but I try to avoid "had had."

The bike frame consisted of three steel tubes.

When children were in elementary school, most of them started learning to ride bikes.

But they were too short to ride bikesthem.

Since their legs were short, they couldn't reach the pedals if they sat on the seat.

So when they learn to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, put and their right foot on the right pedal through the space inside the frame.

When children learned to ride, their parents heold the rear shelf of the bike so that the childreny would not fall down before they could controlbalance the bike in balanceproperly.

However, before the children couldan really ride bikes, all of themcycles by themselves, they would all fall off the bikedown several times.

But they wouldn't get hurt because the gry wounld wasland on soil.

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Jack

June 23, 2024

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Thank you very much.

Learn to Ride Bikes in the Past.


Learning to Ride Bikes in the Past.

Learning to Ride Bikes in the Past.

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Learn to Ride Bikes in the Past.

How I learnt to ride a bike

When I was a child, only two or three families in my village had a bike.


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Families having a bike at that time in the countryside were considered rich.


Families havingwho owned a bike at that time in the countryside time were considered rich in the countryside.

Families having a bike at that timAt the time, families who had a bike in the countryside were considered rich.

Families havingwith a bike at that time in the countryside were considered rich.

Families havowning a bike at that time in the countryside were considered rich.

My family had a bike, but I didn't think my family was rich.


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My family bought a bike because my father needed it.


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My father worked for the township government.


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My fatherHe worked for the township government.,

township government OR municipal government

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My father worked for the township government.local council.

He rode the bike to work and went back home.


He rode the bike to work and went back homeand from work.

Heand rode the bike to work and went back homeand from work.

He rode the bike to work and went back home.

He rode the bike to work and went back homeback and forth to work.

When children were in elementary school, most of them started learning to ride bikes.


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When children were in elementary school, most of them started learning to ride bikes.

"...started learning to ride bikes." OR "...started to learn how to ride bikes."

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Since their legs were short, they couldn't reach the pedals if they sat on the seat.


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So when they learn to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, put their right foot on the right pedal through the space inside the frame.


So when they learn to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, put and their right foot on the right pedal through the space inside the frame.

So when they learned to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, and put their right foot on the right pedal through the space insidebetween the frame.

So when they learned to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, and put their right foot on the right pedal through the space inside the frame.

So when they learnt to ride bikes, they put their left foot on the left pedal, put their right foot on the right pedal through the space inside the frame.

When children learned to ride, their parents held the rear shelf of the bike so that the children would not fall down before they could control the bike in balance.


When children learned to ride, their parents heold the rear shelf of the bike so that the childreny would not fall down before they could controlbalance the bike in balanceproperly.

When children learned to ride, their parents held the rear shelf of the bike so that the childreney would not fall down before they could control the bike inand balance.

When children learned to ride, their parents held the rear shelfrack of the bike so that the children would not fall down before they could control the bike in balance.

When children learned to ride, their parents held the rear shelf of the bike so that the children would not fall down before they coul. This helped control the bike in balance.

However, before the children could really ride bikes, all of them would fall off the bike several times.


However, before the children couldan really ride bikes, all of themcycles by themselves, they would all fall off the bikedown several times.

However, before the children could really ride bikes, all of them by themselves, they would fall off the bike several times.

However, before the children could really ride bikeslearned to ride, all of them would fall off the bike several times.

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But they wouldn't get hurt because the ground was soil.


But they wouldn't get hurt because the gry wounld wasland on soil.

But they wouldn't get hurt because the ground they landed on was soil.

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But they wouldn't get hurt because the ground was soil.ft.

There were not many types of bikes back then.


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The bikes people had were in almost the same structure.


The bikes people had were in almost the same structurestructured similarly.

Or: "The bikes people had had almost the same structure," but I try to avoid "had had."

The bikes people had were in almost all of the same structure.,

The bikes people had were in almostmostly had the same structure.

The bikes people had were in almost the same structype and had the same features.

The bike frame consisted of three steel tubes.


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The bike framewhich consisted of three steel tubes.

"The bike frame consisted of three steel tubes," is correct, but in English we do not like to repeat the topic of a sentence. So, consider connecting the sentences.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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But they were too short to ride bikes.


But they were too short to ride bikesthem.

But they were too short to ride the bikes.

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But theyre were too short to riden’t enough bikes.

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