Dec. 2, 2020
Dream
I dreamed i was at the top of a hill that was so high that it surpassed the clouds and the sky had a strange pink and blue hue; the air was warm.
Soñé que me encontraba en la cima de una colina que era tan alta que sobrepasaba las nubes y el cielo tenía una extraña tonalidad rosada y celeste ; el aire era cálido.
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Dream
I dreamed iI was at the top of a hill that was so high that it surpassedpeaked through the clouds, and the sky had a strange pink andish blue hue; the air was warm.
I dreamed I was at the top of a hill that was so high that it peaked through the clouds, and the sky had a strange pinkish blue hue; the air was warm.
I feel "surpassed" is not a correct choice of word (it means something like "outperformed"). (Also consider using "dreamt" instead of "dreamed".)
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Ending with "the air was warm" is technically correct, but not recommended. It needs to be blended into the sentence, but to do so, it'll need restructuring, such as in:
I dreamed I was at the top of a hill that was so high that it peaked through the clouds, while surrounded by warm air gazing at the strange pinkish blue hue of an unfamiliar sky.
Dream
I dreamed ithat I was at the top of a hill that was so high that it surpassed the clouds, and the sky had a strange pink and blue hue; the air was warm.
I dreamed that I was at the top of a hill that was so high that it surpassed the clouds, and the sky had a strange pink and blue hue; the air was warm.
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I dreamed i was at the top of a hill that was so high that it surpassed the clouds and the sky had a strange pink and blue hue; the air was warm.
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I dreamed I feel "surpassed" is not a correct choice of word (it means something like "outperformed"). (Also consider using "dreamt" instead of "dreamed".) |
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