Dec. 2, 2020
Journal 12/1/20
This afternoon when I was at my office, I heard a touching story from a Tik Toker. His names are Ben and Ernie. He said when he was a teenager, his grandma’s health was not in good condition. The doctor suggested that she should do some exercises regularly. His mom lets him take a walk with his grandma every day. His grandma often told him some interesting things about life lessons, and often asked him “how was your day” He said he was very reluctant to walk with his grandma every day, and he was always answering his grandma with “good” or “same as always”. He wanted to hang out with people at his age, and he was afraid that his friends would laugh at him because he was always hanging out with his grandma. This kind of situation changed when he went to college. One day in the first semester, his mother called me and told him that his grandma had passed away in her sleep. He was shocked when he heard this unexpected information, and he immediately headed home. At that moment, he cried and he started to know the love from his grandma and he regretted his behavior when he was with his grandma. He said it was at that moment, he felt he was really missing his grandma and started to know how much his grandma loved him. He hopes people love their families when the families are alive.
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His names are Ben and Ernie. His names are Ben and Ernie.
One person had two names?
His mom lets him take a walk with his grandma every day.
His mom let him take a walk with his grandma every day.
The word "let" here means that his mother allowed him to -- like that he asked to take his grandmother walking and his mom gave him permission. The rest of the story makes it clear that he didn't want to do this at first. I think maybe you mean that his mother asked him to take a walk with his grandma every day.
His grandma often told him some interesting things aboutnd life lessons, and often asked him, “hHow was your day?” He said he was very reluctant to walk with his grandma every day, and he was always answering his grandma with “good” or “same as always”.
His grandma often told him some interesting things and life lessons, and often asked him, “How was your day?” He said he was very reluctant to walk with his grandma every day, and he was always answering his grandma with “good” or “same as always”.
He wanted to hang out with people at his age, and he was afraid that his friends would laugh at him because he was always hanging out with his grandma.
He wanted to hang out with people his age, and he was afraid that his friends would laugh at him because he was always hanging out with his grandma.
This kind of situation changed when he went to college.
This situation changed when he went to college.
One day in the first semester, his mother called hime and told him that his grandma had passed away in her sleep.
One day in the first semester, his mother called him and told him that his grandma had passed away in her sleep.
At that moment, he cried and he started to know the love from his grandma and he regretted his behavior when he was with his grandma. At that moment, he cried and he started to know the love from his grandma and he regretted his behavior when he was with his grandma.
When he started to know his grandma's love, was it realizing he loved his grandmother or realizing she loved him?
The first one would be something like "he cried and felt love for his grandma," the second one would be something like, "he cried and realized how much his grandma loved him."
He said it was at that moment, he felt he was really missinged his grandma and started tofinally knoew how much his grandma loved him.
He said it was at that moment, he felt he really missed his grandma and finally knew how much his grandma loved him.
He hopes people will love their families whilen the families are alive.
He hopes people will love their families while the families are alive.
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This is a good story!
Dec. 2, 2020
His names are Ben and Ernie.
One person had two names?
Their names
Dec. 2, 2020
His mom lets him take a walk with his grandma every day.
The word "let" here means that his mother allowed him to -- like that he asked to take his grandmother walking and his mom gave him permission. The rest of the story makes it clear that he didn't want to do this at first. I think maybe you mean that his mother asked him to take a walk with his grandma every day.
Got it the meaning of let
Dec. 2, 2020
Thank you for your corrections.
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Journal 12/1/20 |
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This afternoon when I was at my office, I heard a touching story from a Tik Toker. |
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His names are Ben and Ernie. His names are Ben and Ernie. His names are Ben and Ernie. One person had two names? |
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He said when he was a teenager, his grandma’s health was not in good condition. |
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The doctor suggested that she should do some exercises regularly. |
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His mom lets him take a walk with his grandma every day.
His mom let The word "let" here means that his mother allowed him to -- like that he asked to take his grandmother walking and his mom gave him permission. The rest of the story makes it clear that he didn't want to do this at first. I think maybe you mean that his mother asked him to take a walk with his grandma every day. |
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His grandma often told him some interesting things about life lessons, and often asked him “how was your day” He said he was very reluctant to walk with his grandma every day, and he was always answering his grandma with “good” or “same as always”.
His grandma often told him some interesting things a |
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He wanted to hang out with people at his age, and he was afraid that his friends would laugh at him because he was always hanging out with his grandma.
He wanted to hang out with people |
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This kind of situation changed when he went to college.
This |
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One day in the first semester, his mother called me and told him that his grandma had passed away in her sleep.
One day in the first semester, his mother called him |
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He was shocked when he heard this unexpected information, and he immediately headed home. |
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At that moment, he cried and he started to know the love from his grandma and he regretted his behavior when he was with his grandma. At that moment, he cried and he started to know the love from his grandma and he regretted his behavior when he was with his grandma. At that moment, he cried and he started to know the love from his grandma and he regretted his behavior when he was with his grandma. When he started to know his grandma's love, was it realizing he loved his grandmother or realizing she loved him? The first one would be something like "he cried and felt love for his grandma," the second one would be something like, "he cried and realized how much his grandma loved him." |
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He said it was at that moment, he felt he was really missing his grandma and started to know how much his grandma loved him.
He said it was at that moment, he felt he |
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He hopes people love their families when the families are alive.
He hopes people will love their families while |
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