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Justinemlt

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Lawyer/ English

Later, i want worked in law. Since i was young, i wanted to be a lawyer. Now, i'm not sur if i want to be a lawyer, i'm just sur i'm born to worked in law. I love the legal world. I don't know why ? It's a good question, i don't know if I can answer this question. I want justice be done and created a better world. I know it's complicated and probably not possible but i want belive in my dream. My dream can true. It's for that, i pratice my english, for the school i want integrated, i must have a good english. I want to be bilingual.


Plus tard, je veux travailler dans le droit. Depuis tout petit, je voulais être avocat. Maintenant, je ne suis pas sûr de vouloir être avocat, je suis juste certain d'être né pour travailler dans le droit. J'aime le monde juridique. Je ne sais pas pourquoi ? C'est une bonne question, mais je ne sais pas si je peux y répondre. Je veux que justice soit faite et qu'un monde meilleur soit créé. Je sais que c'est compliqué et probablement impossible, mais je veux croire en mon rêve. Mon rêve peut se réaliser. C'est pour cela que je pratique l'anglais. Pour l'école que je souhaite intégrer, je dois avoir un bon anglais. Je veux être bilingue.

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Later, iI want to worked in law.

SEver since iI was young, iI wanted to be a lawyer.

"I" is always capitalized

Now, i I'm not sure if iI want to be a lawyer, iI'm just sur i'me I was born to worked in law.

I love the legal world.

I don't know why ?.

This isn't a question, so no question mark

It's a good question, i. I don't know if I can answer this question.

I want justice to be done and to help created a better world.

I know it's complicated and probably not possible, but iI want to believe in my dream.

My dream can come true.

It's for that, i reason that I practice my eEnglish, because for the school iI want integrato attend, iI must have a good eEnglish.

I want to be bilingual.

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Great job. It's important to follow your passions in life. I wish you luck!

Lawyer/ English


Later, i want worked in law.


Later, iI want to worked in law.

Since i was young, i wanted to be a lawyer.


SEver since iI was young, iI wanted to be a lawyer.

"I" is always capitalized

Now, i'm not sur if i want to be a lawyer, i'm just sur i'm born to worked in law.


Now, i I'm not sure if iI want to be a lawyer, iI'm just sur i'me I was born to worked in law.

I love the legal world.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't know why ?


I don't know why ?.

This isn't a question, so no question mark

It's a good question, i don't know if I can answer this question.


It's a good question, i. I don't know if I can answer this question.

I want justice be done and created a better world.


I want justice to be done and to help created a better world.

I know it's complicated and probably not possible but i want belive in my dream.


I know it's complicated and probably not possible, but iI want to believe in my dream.

My dream can true.


My dream can come true.

It's for that, i pratice my english, for the school i want integrated, i must have a good english.


It's for that, i reason that I practice my eEnglish, because for the school iI want integrato attend, iI must have a good eEnglish.

I want to be bilingual.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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