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sunepeadam

Oct. 11, 2020

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Lavinia Turkish-English poem

I am not going to say don't leave
You are cold, take my jacket
These are the most beautiful hours of the day
Stay next to me.




I am not going to say don't leave
Neverthless, it's up to you
If you want lies then I tell you lies
You will get hurt


I am not going to say don't leave
However, don't leave Lavinia
I will hide your name
So, you are not going to know too.


Sana gitme demeyeceğim.
Üşüyorsun ceketimi al.
Günün en güzel saatleri bunlar.
Yanımda kal.

Sana gitme demeyeceğim.
Gene de sen bilirsin.
Yalanlar istiyorsan yalanlar söyleyeyim,
İncinirsin.

Sana gitme demeyeceğim,
Ama gitme, Lavinia.
Adını gizleyeceğim
Sen de bilme, Lavinia.

Corrections

Lavinia Turkish-English pPoem

I am not going to say don't leave.

You can also use "I'm" instead of "I am".

You are cold, take my jacket

You can say "you're" instead of "you are".

I am not going to say don't leave.

You can also use "I'm" instead of "I am".

Nevertheless, it's up to you.

If you want lies, then I'll tell you lies.

You will get hurt.

You can say "you'll" instead of "you will".

I am not going to say don't leave.

You can also use "I'm" instead of "I am".

However, don't leave Lavinia.

I will hide your name.

You can say "I'll" instead of "I will".

So, you a're not going to know too.

I don't really know what you're trying to say here.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

Lavinia Turkish-English poem


Lavinia Turkish-English pPoem

I am not going to say don't leave


I am not going to say don't leave.

You can also use "I'm" instead of "I am".

You are cold, take my jacket


You are cold, take my jacket

You can say "you're" instead of "you are".

These are the most beautiful hours of the day


Stay next to me.


I am not going to say don't leave


I am not going to say don't leave.

You can also use "I'm" instead of "I am".

Neverthless, it's up to you


Nevertheless, it's up to you.

If you want lies then I tell you lies


If you want lies, then I'll tell you lies.

You will get hurt


You will get hurt.

You can say "you'll" instead of "you will".

I am not going to say don't leave


I am not going to say don't leave.

You can also use "I'm" instead of "I am".

However, don't leave Lavinia


However, don't leave Lavinia.

I will hide your name


I will hide your name.

You can say "I'll" instead of "I will".

So, you are not going to know too.


So, you a're not going to know too.

I don't really know what you're trying to say here.

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