March 28, 2022
Laundry
As expected, I woke up late today. It's natural to me. I always wake up late.
I thought I had to do the laundry. The laundry has piled up. I decided to wash the towels and the underwears. I've hated one thing that my towels don't smell good after the wash. So I googled and found one tip. It was the Rox, a chlorine bleach. I heard there is the Clorox in US. We have a Rox in Korea. Anyway, they told me to dilute it. So I filled the basin with about 40 liters of water and poured 150 milliliters of bleach. Then waited for 10 minutes. After one rinse, I fired up the washing machine in the usual way. Now the machine is doing its job and I'm looking forward to meet my fresh scented towels.
Laundry
As expected, I woke up late today.
It's natural to me.
I always wake up late.
I thought I had to do the laundry.
It sounds more natural to not use "the" before laundry here, but it is not grammatically incorrect to do so.
The laundry has piled up.
I decided to wash the towels and the underwears.
Underwear does not have to be pluralized.
I've hated one thing that, my towels don't smell good after the wash.
So I googled and found onea tip.
It sounds more natural to use "a" instead of "one" here. In general, it is best to stick to using the indefinite article when referring to a singular thing, unless you want to emphasize that there is only one (e.g. I only found one tip).
It was the Rox, a chlorine bleach.
I heard there is the Clorox in the US.
Always use "the" when referring to the United States.
We have a Rox in Korea.
Anyway, they told me to dilute it.
So I filled the basin with about 40 liters of water and poured 150 milliliters of bleach.
Then waited for 10 minutes.
After one rinse, I fired up the washing machine in theas usual way.
Writing "in the usual way" is grammatically correct, but a little wordy.
Now the machine is doing its job and I'm looking forward to meeting my fresh scented towels.
Feedback
This journal is good. In general, it seems you are using articles, or dropping articles, in places that sound strange to a native speaker. Other than this, your writing is very natural.
March 28, 2022
Thank you so much :D
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Laundry This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As expected, I woke up late today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's natural to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I always wake up late. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I thought I had to do the laundry. I thought I had to do It sounds more natural to not use "the" before laundry here, but it is not grammatically incorrect to do so. |
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The laundry has piled up. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I decided to wash the towels and the underwears. I decided to wash the towels and Underwear does not have to be pluralized. |
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I've hated one thing that my towels don't smell good after the wash. I've hated one thing |
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So I googled and found one tip. So I googled and found It sounds more natural to use "a" instead of "one" here. In general, it is best to stick to using the indefinite article when referring to a singular thing, unless you want to emphasize that there is only one (e.g. I only found one tip). |
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It was the Rox, a chlorine bleach. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I heard there is the Clorox in US. I heard there is Always use "the" when referring to the United States. |
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We have a Rox in Korea. We have |
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Anyway, they told me to dilute it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I filled the basin with about 40 liters of water and poured 150 milliliters of bleach. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then waited for 10 minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After one rinse, I fired up the washing machine in the usual way. After one rinse, I fired up the washing machine Writing "in the usual way" is grammatically correct, but a little wordy. |
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Now the machine is doing its job and I'm looking forward to meet my fresh scented towels. Now the machine is doing its job and I'm looking forward to meeting my fresh scented towels. |
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