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Laundromat (62)

I went to a laundromat.

When I went into it, a woman came at the same time.

There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupied.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.


コインランドリーに行きました。

私が入った時同時に一人の女性が入って来ました。

使える洗濯機は一個だけで、他は全部使用中でした。

彼女は、素早く自分の洗濯物をその洗濯機に入れてさっさとどこかへ行ってしまいました。

私は、20分待たなければなりませんでした。

彼女は、わざとやったわけじゃないと思うけど、なんだか割り込みされた気分です。

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Laundromat (62)

I went to a laundromat.

When I went into it, another woman came at the same time as me.

There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupied.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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sachisachi

March 23, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

Laundromat (62)

I went to a laundromat.

When I went into it, a woman came in at the same time.

There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupied.

I think "being used" is more natural than "occupied." But "occupied" is also OK.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do thait intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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Nicely written! That sounds inconvenient.

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sachisachi

March 21, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

Laundromat (62)ette

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I went to a lLaundromatette.

When I went into it, a woman camegot there, another woman arrived at the same time.

There was only one available washing machine available, ands the other ones were all occupied.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to become available.

I suppose the woman didn't do thamean to do it intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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mike1

March 20, 2024

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Maybe she was in a rush for something important and was too embarrassed to apologise. Seems rude though!

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sachisachi

March 20, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction.

Laundromat (62)

I went to a laundromat.

When I went into it, a(nother) woman came in at the same time.

There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupibeing used.

"Occupied" isn't wrong, but "being used" might be a better choice.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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That's frustrating! When I use the shared laundry room at my dorm, I try to go early in the morning so there's lots of machines available.

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sachisachi

March 16, 2024

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That's a smart idea! Thank you so much for your correction!

Laundromat (62)

I went to a laundromat.

When I went into it, a woman came at the same time as me.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for another machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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sachisachi

March 14, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

Laundromat

I went to a laundromat.

When I went into itside, a woman camewent in at the same time.

There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupied.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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This is very well written, only a few minor mistakes!
I hope her actions were not intentional!

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sachisachi

March 14, 2024

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I hope so. Thank you so much for your correction!

Laundromat

I went to a laundromat.

When I went into it, a woman came in at the same time.

There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupied.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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Aw that sucks! Laundromats can be pretty inconvenient sometimes

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sachisachi

March 14, 2024

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Yes, that sucks! Thank you so much for your correction!

Laundromat

I went to a laundromat.

When I went into it,As I was going in, a woman camewent in at the same time.

There was only one available washing machine, and (all) the other ones were occupied.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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sachisachi

March 13, 2024

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Thank you for your correction!

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Laundromat

I went to a laundromat.

WhenAs I went into itered, a woman came in at the same time.

There was only one available washing machine, andvailable then, as the other ones were occupiedin use.

She put her clothes in it quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to be available.

I suppose the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she barged in and took the last one.

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jeemeegee

March 13, 2024

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This correction is good!

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sachisachi

March 13, 2024

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Thank you for your correction!

When I went into it, a woman came at the same tiside, another woman joined me.

There was only one available washing machine, and all the other ones were occupied.

She put her clothes in itside the sole washing machine and quickly and left.

I had to wait for 20 minutes for a machine to become available.

I suppose that the woman didn't do that intentionally, but I felt like she had barged in and tookused the lwast onehing machine without asking.

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sachisachi

March 13, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

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When I went into it, a woman came at the same time.


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There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupied.


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There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupibeing used.

"Occupied" isn't wrong, but "being used" might be a better choice.

There was only one available washing machine available, ands the other ones were all occupied.

There was only one available washing machine, and the other ones were occupied.

I think "being used" is more natural than "occupied." But "occupied" is also OK.

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