Feb. 2, 2022
Latin American Economy
According to The World Bank, Latin America, based on market prices, is the third-largest Economy worldwide with 6.06 billion dollars and It is mainly based on the secondary and tertiary economy.
Based on FMI projections of the PIB in 2021, the largest economies in Latin America are headed by Brazil with 3.30 billion dollars and Mexico with 2.61 billion dollars.
According to the FMI projections in April 2021, the most developed economies in terms of PIB per capita PPA are Panama with $30390 and Chile with $24930. Also, in the last report of the United Nations Development Program, the economies with the largest human development index are Chile, Argentina, and Uruguay.
On July 1, 2013, The World Bank cataloged Chile and Uruguay as high-income economies being the first time in history that countries of this region shared this status.
Nowadays, 3 types of economic systems can be recognized in Latin America. These types follow a predetermined line.
The first line is the capitalist, based on an open market. Here are countries like Chile, México, Colombia, Peru, and Panama that follows economic models of The United States.
In the second line, there are countries that are open to the world but are clearly protectionist, with social democratic and of mixed economies.
In the third line, there are countries with closed economies or with very little free market. They follow the Marxist Economic Model and only have commercial relationships with countries of their same block.
Latin American Economy
According to The World Bank, Latin America, based on market prices, is the third-largest Economy worldwide with 6.06 billion dollars and, based on market prices. It is mainly based on the secondary and tertiary economy.
I am not sure what the second sentence means; "It is mainly based..." might be better as "This is mainly based...
Based on FMI projections of the PIB in 2021, the largest economies in Latin America are headed by Brazil with 3.30 billion dollars and Mexico with 2.61 billion dollars.
According to the FMI projections in April 2021, the most developed economies in terms of PIB per capita PPA are Panama with $30390 and Chile with $24930.
Also, in the latest report of the United Nations Development Program, the economies with the largest human development index are Chile, Argentina, and Uruguay.
On July 1, 2013, The World Bank cataloged Chile and Uruguay as high-income economies being. This is the first time in history that countries of this region shared this status.
Nowadays, 3 types of economic systems can be recognized in Latin America.
These types follow a predetermined line.
The first line is the capitalist, based on an open market.
I am not very familiar with your subject matter, but "the capitalist" sounds strange, because "capitalist" is an adjective (unless it's a person... then it can be a noun). I think it would be better as "capitalism" or "the capitalist line"
HerThese are countries like Chile, México, Colombia, Peru, and Panama that follows the economic models of The United States.
In the second line, there are countries that are open to the world but are clearly protectionist, with a social democratic government and of mixed economies.
In the third line, there are countries with closed economies or with very little free market.
They follow the Marxist Economic Model and only have commercial relationships with countries of their same block.
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Nicely done for some very technical writing!
Feb. 5, 2022
Thanks a lot
Latin American Economy
According to The World Bank, Latin America, based on market prices, is the third-largest Economy worldwide with 6.06 billion dollars and It is mainly based on the secondary and tertiary economy.
According to The World Bank, Latin America, based on market prices, is the third-largest economy worldwide with 6.06 billion dollars which is mainly based on the secondary and tertiary economies.
Based on FMI projections of the PIB in 2021, the largest economies in Latin America are headed by Brazil with 3.30 billion dollars and Mexico with 2.61 billion dollars.
According to the FMI projections in April 2021, the most developed economies in terms of PIB per capita PPA are Panama with $30390 and Chile with $24930.
Also, in the last report of the United Nations Development Program, the economies with the largest human development index are Chile, Argentina, and Uruguay.
"highest" instead of "largest" would likely make more sense.
On July 1, 2013, The World Bank cataloged Chile and Uruguay as high-income economies being the first time in history that countries of this region shared this status.
comma after "high-income economies" needed.
Nowadays, 3 types of economic systems can be recognized in Latin America.
These types follow a predetermined line.
The first line is the capitalist, based on an open market.
Here are countries like Chile, México, Colombia, Peru, and Panama that follows economic models of The United States.
follow instead of "follows"
In the second line, there are countries that are open to the world but are clearly protectionist, with social democratic and of mixed economies.
"with social democratic and of mixed economies" is unclear.
"with social, democratic, and mixed economies" is clearer and has the correct commas.
In the third line, there are countries with closed economies or with very little free market.
I think it would be "markets" here.
They follow the Marxist Economic Model and only have commercial relationships with countries of their same block.
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Very well written!
Feb. 5, 2022
Thanks a lot
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According to The World Bank, Latin America, based on market prices, is the third-largest Economy worldwide with 6.06 billion dollars and It is mainly based on the secondary and tertiary economy. According to The World Bank, Latin America, based on market prices, is the third-largest Economy worldwide with 6.06 billion dollars and It is mainly based on the secondary and tertiary economy. According to The World Bank, Latin America, based on market prices, is the third-largest economy worldwide with 6.06 billion dollars which is mainly based on the secondary and tertiary economies. According to The World Bank, Latin America I am not sure what the second sentence means; "It is mainly based..." might be better as "This is mainly based... |
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Based on FMI projections of the PIB in 2021, the largest economies in Latin America are headed by Brazil with 3.30 billion dollars and Mexico with 2.61 billion dollars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to the FMI projections in April 2021, the most developed economies in terms of PIB per capita PPA are Panama with $30390 and Chile with $24930. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, in the last report of the United Nations Development Program, the economies with the largest human development index are Chile, Argentina, and Uruguay. Also, in the last report of the United Nations Development Program, the economies with the largest human development index are Chile, Argentina, and Uruguay. "highest" instead of "largest" would likely make more sense. Also, in the latest report of the United Nations Development Program, the economies with the largest human development index are Chile, Argentina, and Uruguay. |
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On July 1, 2013, The World Bank cataloged Chile and Uruguay as high-income economies being the first time in history that countries of this region shared this status. On July 1, 2013, The World Bank cataloged Chile and Uruguay as high-income economies being the first time in history that countries of this region shared this status. comma after "high-income economies" needed. On July 1, 2013, The World Bank cataloged Chile and Uruguay as high-income economies |
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Nowadays, 3 types of economic systems can be recognized in Latin America. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These types follow a predetermined line. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first line is the capitalist, based on an open market. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The first line is the capitalist, based on an open market. I am not very familiar with your subject matter, but "the capitalist" sounds strange, because "capitalist" is an adjective (unless it's a person... then it can be a noun). I think it would be better as "capitalism" or "the capitalist line" |
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Here are countries like Chile, México, Colombia, Peru, and Panama that follows economic models of The United States. Here are countries like Chile, México, Colombia, Peru, and Panama that follows economic models of The United States. follow instead of "follows"
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In the second line, there are countries that are open to the world but are clearly protectionist, with social democratic and of mixed economies. In the second line, there are countries that are open to the world but are clearly protectionist, with social democratic and of mixed economies. "with social democratic and of mixed economies" is unclear. "with social, democratic, and mixed economies" is clearer and has the correct commas. In the second line, there are countries that are open to the world but are clearly protectionist, with a social democratic government and of mixed economies. |
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In the third line, there are countries with closed economies or with very little free market. In the third line, there are countries with closed economies or with very little free market. I think it would be "markets" here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They follow the Marxist Economic Model and only have commercial relationships with countries of their same block. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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