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tzoli96

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Latent cold

My grilfriend's sister gave birth.
Her husband invited me a milk forther so i attended.
The next morning i woke up with a sore throat.
I was feeling lumps in my throat.
Usually i feel like that in the morning and evening because my immun system at its weakset at this time.
I hope i will recover to sunday because my firends invited me to his birthday i would like to attend there also.

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Latent cold

"Lingering cold" is the typical way to say this in English.

Latent cCold

My grirlfriend's sister gave birth.

Her husband invited me a milk forthto a baby shower, so iI attended.

I'm not sure what you meant by "milk frother" lol. We don't have that phrase in English. A milk frother is just a kitchen tool used to froth milk for coffee and other fancy drinks. We would use "baby shower" maybe, but that's usually done before the baby arrives.

The next morning i, I woke up with a sore throat.

I was feelinghad a lumps in my throat.

The way you phrased it originally would be used for much more serious health concerns, like cancer.

Usually i, I feel like that in the morning and evening, because my immune system is at its weakset at thisest during those times.

"times" needs to be plural because you listed two different times of day

I hope iI will recover to sby Sunday, because my firiends invited me to his birthday iand I would like to attend there also(go).

Days of the week are capitalized

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Good job! Make sure to double check your spelling and remember that "I" is always capitalized in English.

Latent cold


Latent cCold

Latent cold

"Lingering cold" is the typical way to say this in English.

My grilfriend's sister gave birth.


My grirlfriend's sister gave birth.

Her husband invited me a milk forther so i attended.


Her husband invited me a milk forthto a baby shower, so iI attended.

I'm not sure what you meant by "milk frother" lol. We don't have that phrase in English. A milk frother is just a kitchen tool used to froth milk for coffee and other fancy drinks. We would use "baby shower" maybe, but that's usually done before the baby arrives.

The next morning i woke up with a sore throat.


The next morning i, I woke up with a sore throat.

I was feeling lumps in my throat.


I was feelinghad a lumps in my throat.

The way you phrased it originally would be used for much more serious health concerns, like cancer.

Usually i feel like that in the morning and evening because my immun system at its weakset at this time.


Usually i, I feel like that in the morning and evening, because my immune system is at its weakset at thisest during those times.

"times" needs to be plural because you listed two different times of day

I hope i will recover to sunday because my firends invited me to his birthday i would like to attend there also.


I hope iI will recover to sby Sunday, because my firiends invited me to his birthday iand I would like to attend there also(go).

Days of the week are capitalized

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