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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 26, 2021

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Last week of 2021

There are only 6 days left in 2021.

Each day, I am reviewing my life of 2021 with 8 topics such as family, kids, hobby, English, work, health, note taking and mind.

Based on my old plan when I wrote down in the last week of 2020, I am checking the goals and it is very interesting for me.

Some items are already archived, but others are not yet.

Whether done or not, these feedbacks give me a lot of thoughts, and help to make next year plans.

I hope that I will be happy next year as well.

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Each day, I am reviewing my life ofin 2021 with 8 topics such as family, kids, hobbyies, English, work, health, note taking and mindfulness.

Based on my old plan whenthat I wrote down in the last week of 2020, I am checking the goals and it is very interesting for me.

Some items are already archieved, but others are not yet.

"archived" could be fine if you are taking the done items and putting them in a record (archive) of goals you have completed. But I think this more likely meant "achieved" here.

Whether done or not, theseis feedbacks gives me a lot of thoughts, and helps me to make next year's plans.

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 27, 2021

402

Thank you very much.

Last week of 2021

There are only 6 days left in 2021.

Each day, I am reviewing my life of 2021 withduring 2021 in regard to 8 topics such as family, kids, hobbyies, English, work, health, note taking, and mlearnindg.

Maybe you meant something different for 'mind'. It was a little unclear what it referred to

Based on my old plan when I wrote down the plan I created during the last week of 2020, I am checkreviewing themy goals and it is. This process has been very interesting for me.

Some items argoals have already been archived, but others arhave not yet.

Do you mean 'achieved' instead of 'archived'?

Whether done or not, theseis feedbacks gives me a lot of thoughtideas, and helps to make next year's plans.

I hope that I will be happy next year as well.

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Best of luck achieving your goals! I hope you are happy too :)

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 27, 2021

402

Thank you so much.

Last week of 2021


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Each day, I am reviewing my life of 2021 with 8 topics such as family, kids, hobby, English, work, health, note taking and mind.


Each day, I am reviewing my life of 2021 withduring 2021 in regard to 8 topics such as family, kids, hobbyies, English, work, health, note taking, and mlearnindg.

Maybe you meant something different for 'mind'. It was a little unclear what it referred to

Each day, I am reviewing my life ofin 2021 with 8 topics such as family, kids, hobbyies, English, work, health, note taking and mindfulness.

Based on my old plan when I wrote down in the last week of 2020, I am checking the goals and it is very interesting for me.


Based on my old plan when I wrote down the plan I created during the last week of 2020, I am checkreviewing themy goals and it is. This process has been very interesting for me.

Based on my old plan whenthat I wrote down in the last week of 2020, I am checking the goals and it is very interesting for me.

Some items are already archived, but others are not yet.


Some items argoals have already been archived, but others arhave not yet.

Do you mean 'achieved' instead of 'archived'?

Some items are already archieved, but others are not yet.

"archived" could be fine if you are taking the done items and putting them in a record (archive) of goals you have completed. But I think this more likely meant "achieved" here.

Whether done or not, these feedbacks give me a lot of thoughts, and help to make next year plans.


Whether done or not, theseis feedbacks gives me a lot of thoughtideas, and helps to make next year's plans.

Whether done or not, theseis feedbacks gives me a lot of thoughts, and helps me to make next year's plans.

I hope that I will be happy next year as well.


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