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yone

March 1, 2025

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Last night

I was sleepy at 9 p.m.last night, so I went to bed at 10.30 p.m. However, I woke up half past four this morning. I thought I should't have gone to bed early.

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Last night

I was sleepy at 9 p.m.last night, so I went to bed at 10.30 p.m.

However, I woke up at half past four this morning.

I thought ink I shouldn't have gone to bed early.

Because you still think this now.
Also, you could add x2 'so'... "So I think I shouldn't have gone to bed so early"

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Great job! Keep going! :)

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yone

March 10, 2025

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I would like to use "so" ×2 next time!

I was sleepy at 9 p.m. last night, so I went to bed at 10.30 p.m.

You will often see 10:30 as well as 10.30. I prefer the colon but when I checked it seems a full stop is ok too.

However, I woke up at half past four this morning.

It seem off to change to words when you have numbers before. “I woke up at 4.30 a.m.”. I’ve corrected though as the words are fine

I thought I should'n’t have gone to bed early.

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Good work

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yone

March 2, 2025

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Thank you so much.You taught me a lot of things from this sentence. I am interested in your explanation and advice.

Last night


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was sleepy at 9 p.m.last night, so I went to bed at 10.30 p.m.


I was sleepy at 9 p.m. last night, so I went to bed at 10.30 p.m.

You will often see 10:30 as well as 10.30. I prefer the colon but when I checked it seems a full stop is ok too.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, I woke up half past four this morning.


However, I woke up at half past four this morning.

It seem off to change to words when you have numbers before. “I woke up at 4.30 a.m.”. I’ve corrected though as the words are fine

However, I woke up at half past four this morning.

I thought I should't have gone to bed early.


I thought I should'n’t have gone to bed early.

I thought ink I shouldn't have gone to bed early.

Because you still think this now. Also, you could add x2 'so'... "So I think I shouldn't have gone to bed so early"

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