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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 31, 2021

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Last Day of 2021

At last, today is the last day of 2021.

Many coworkers go to their vacation, and the rest of the workers include me go off work early.

My wife and I visit a bookstore to buy new textbooks for my kids.

And we have dinner near the bookstore while we talk about the next year plans.

From the review of 2021, we had a lot of good experiences and tried to do tons of things for our kids.

We hope that we are able to have better lives next year.

Good bye 2021, and welcome 2022.

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Last Day of 2021

At last, - today is the last day of 2021.

Many of my coworkers go to theirare on vacation, and the rest of the workers, include me go offing me, leave work early.

you could also write 'and the rest of the workforce'

My wife and I visited a bookstore to buy new textbooks for myour kids.

Put this in the past tense. I put 'our kids' assuming they are your wifes children too, if they are 'my' kids then that implies your wife is not the mother and sounds a bit odd.

And wWe haved dinner near the bookstore whileand we talked about theour plans for next year plans.

I was taught in school to never start a sentence with 'And'. If you wanted to use the word while you would write 'While eating dinner, we discussed our plans for next year.'

From the review ofLooking back at 2021, we had a lot of good experiences and tried to do tons of things for our kids.

We hope that we are able to have betteimprove our lives next year.

This sentence would be used after writing about something that didn't go well in 2021.

Good byeFarewell 2021, and welcome 2022.

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:) Well done. Hope you have a great 2022!

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 1, 2022

402

Thank you so much! And happy new year :)

The Last Day of 2021

This is more appropriate as a title

At last, today is the last day of 2021.

Many coworkers go to theiron vacation, and the rest of the workers, includeing me, goet off/leave work early.

My wife and I are going to visit a bookstore to buy new textbooks for my kids.

And we are going to have dinner near the bookstore while we talk about theour plans for next year plans.

From the review of 2021, we had a lot of good experiences and tried to do tons of things for our kids.

We hope that we arwill be able to have better lives next year.

Good bye 2021, and welcome 2022.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Jan. 1, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

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bronshtein

Jan. 1, 2022

2

No problem

Last Day of 2021


The Last Day of 2021

This is more appropriate as a title

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At last, today is the last day of 2021.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At last, - today is the last day of 2021.

Many coworkers go to their vacation, and the rest of the workers include me go off work early.


Many coworkers go to theiron vacation, and the rest of the workers, includeing me, goet off/leave work early.

Many of my coworkers go to theirare on vacation, and the rest of the workers, include me go offing me, leave work early.

you could also write 'and the rest of the workforce'

My wife and I visit a bookstore to buy new textbooks for my kids.


My wife and I are going to visit a bookstore to buy new textbooks for my kids.

My wife and I visited a bookstore to buy new textbooks for myour kids.

Put this in the past tense. I put 'our kids' assuming they are your wifes children too, if they are 'my' kids then that implies your wife is not the mother and sounds a bit odd.

And we have dinner near the bookstore while we talk about the next year plans.


And we are going to have dinner near the bookstore while we talk about theour plans for next year plans.

And wWe haved dinner near the bookstore whileand we talked about theour plans for next year plans.

I was taught in school to never start a sentence with 'And'. If you wanted to use the word while you would write 'While eating dinner, we discussed our plans for next year.'

From the review of 2021, we had a lot of good experiences and tried to do tons of things for our kids.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

From the review ofLooking back at 2021, we had a lot of good experiences and tried to do tons of things for our kids.

We hope that we are able to have better lives next year.


We hope that we arwill be able to have better lives next year.

We hope that we are able to have betteimprove our lives next year.

This sentence would be used after writing about something that didn't go well in 2021.

Good bye 2021, and welcome 2022.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Good byeFarewell 2021, and welcome 2022.

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