Jan. 7, 2025
Las primeras personas en el Everest
En 1953, dos hombres comenzaron a escalar la montaña.
Se llamaban Edmund Hillary y Tenzing Norgay.
Eran alpinistas.
Querían escalar el Everest.
El Everest es la montaña más alta del mundo.
Nadie había subido nunca a la cima.
Muchas personas lo habían intentado, pero no pudieron.
Era un viaje peligroso.
En la cima de la montaña hace frío y hay poco oxígeno.
Hillary y Tenzing se habían estado preparando durante mucho tiempo.
Comenzaron la escalada con un equipo.
El camino era difícil.
Subieron a través de glaciares.
Atravesaron tormentas de nieve.
Cada paso era peligroso.
A veces pensaban que no lo conseguirían.
Pero siguieron adelante.
El 29 de mayo de 1953, llegaron a la cumbre.
Eran las primeras personas en el Everest.
Estaban a una altura de 8.848 metros.
Miraron hacia abajo en el mundo.
Fue un gran momento.
Su logro se convirtió en historia.
Ahora todo el mundo conoce sus nombres.
The first people on Everest
In 1953, two men began climbing the mountain.
Their names were Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay.
They were mountaineers.
They wanted to climb Mount Everest.
Everest is the highest mountain in the world.
No one had ever climbed to the top before.
Many people had tried, but they couldn't.
It was a dangerous journey.
At the top of the mountain, it is cold and there is little oxygen.
Hillary and Tenzing had been preparing for a long time.
They started the climb with a team.
The path was difficult.
They climbed through glaciers.
They went through snow storms.
Every step was dangerous.
Sometimes they thought they wouldn't make it.
But they kept going forward.
On May 29, 1953, they reached the summit.
They were the first people on Everest.
They stood at a height of 8,848 meters.
They looked down on the world.
It was a great moment.
Their achievement became history.
Now the whole world knows their names.
Las primeras personas en el Everest
En 1953, dos hombres comenzaron a escalar la montaña.
Se llamaban Edmund Hillary y Tenzing Norgay.
Eran alpinistas.
Querían escalar el Everest.
El Everest es la montaña más alta del mundo.
Nadie había subido nunca a la cima.
Muchas personas lo habían intentado, pero no pudieron.
Era un viaje peligroso.
En la cima de la montaña hace frío y hay poco oxígeno.
Hillary y Tenzing se habían estado preparando durante mucho tiempo.
Comenzaron la escalada con un equipo.
El camino era difícil.
Subieron a través de glaciares.
Atravesaron tormentas de nieve.
Cada paso era peligroso.
A veces pensaban que no lo conseguirían.
Pero siguieron adelante.
El 29 de mayo de 1953, llegaron a la cumbre.
Eran las primeras personas en el Everest.
Estaban a una altura de 8.848 metros.
Miraron hacia abajo en el mundo.
Fue un gran momento.
Su logro se convirtió en historia.
Ahora todo el mundo conoce sus nombres.
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No hay ninguna falta ortográfica ni gramatical, pero el texto tiene poca fluidez. Mi recomendación para evitar eso es que utilices comas, punto y coma... y hagas oraciones más extensas, para facilitar su lectura.
Las primeras personas en el Everest
En 1953, dos hombres comenzaron a escalar la montaña.
Se llamaban Edmund Hillary y Tenzing Norgay.
Eran alpinistas.
Querían escalar el Everest.
El Everest es la montaña más alta del mundo.
Nadie había subido nunca a la cima.
Muchas personas lo habían intentado, pero no pudieron.
Era un viaje peligroso.
En la cima de la montaña hace frío y hay poco oxígeno.
Hillary y Tenzing se habían estado preparando durante mucho tiempo.
Comenzaron la escalada con un equipo.
El camino era difícil.
Subieron a través de glaciares.
Atravesaron tormentas de nieve.
Cada paso era peligroso.
A veces pensaban que no lo conseguirían.
Pero siguieron adelante.
El 29 de mayo de 1953, llegaron a la cumbre.
Eran las primeras personas en el Everest.
Estaban a una altura de 8.848 metros.
Miraron hacia abajo eban eal mundo desde arriba.
I had to rephrase this sentence to keep the original message.
Fue un gran momento.
Su logro se convirtió en historia.
Ahora todo el mundo conoce sus nombres.
Feedback
Muy bien hecho.
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